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for Growing together, growing apart

by Raelyn

person Ivy
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good! I read all six chapters in one sitting =) I like how you wrote Sasuke/Naruto's relationship and Sakura needs to get over being jealous. I like when Naruto said he wasn't yours to steal! Anyways, I'll be looking for updates ^_^
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, i've quite enjoyed reading it so far and the flashbacks are excellent.
person cbm
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks
person dkf
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Nice story. I like the Idea of Juugo staying Konoha. Also, Lee not holding a grudge rings true to me.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop in and say I really love it! I'm glad you're not doing the Sakura bashing thing either. It works in some stories but in this one she seems mature enough to handle it like a big girl. =p
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story, i can't wait for more!
person Arli
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What cares what Sakura thinks. She can drop dead for all I care.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This story is really good. It's almost like watching the anime show. Keep up the good work!!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so i am going to check out the other four chapters on ffnet. if you need any motivation for your writer's blocki just want to say that i have coookies and ice cream and i'll even pull out the marshmellows. can't wait to see the next chapter (obviously cause i'm headed to ffnet).
person susanna
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really cute how they came together! Sasuke thinking what he wanted Naruto to be for him, and then coming back and tell him... :-)