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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter. It's just such a sad situation between all of them. I can't wait to read more.
Rox
Rox
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked chapter 6. I really enjoyed how you made Kiba's personality and how he could "smell" Sakura on Naruto. Very nice thinking on your part.
I was kind of confused with Sakura/Sasuke. I wasn't sure if he knew something happened or if he wanted to clarify that she will stay away from Naruto or else. I was really happy you updated! It has been awhile, but writer's block does truly suck. Hopefully you're past that and now know where you want the story to go. Gosh I love love love love this fic! Please update when possible.
I was kind of confused with Sakura/Sasuke. I wasn't sure if he knew something happened or if he wanted to clarify that she will stay away from Naruto or else. I was really happy you updated! It has been awhile, but writer's block does truly suck. Hopefully you're past that and now know where you want the story to go. Gosh I love love love love this fic! Please update when possible.
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“I even loved you when you chose Sasuke, even when I willed myself to hate you.” OMG!!!!! I almost cried at this line!!
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH! I'm loving this story; great job so far!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the angst. it's good
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! Why can Sasuke and Hinata find each other and leave Naruto and Sakura alone!! Go Naruto!! Update soon...PLEASE!
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you rewrote this chapter. The original version made it seem like Naruto was not only becoming attached to there situation but being deadly obsessed. Now it seems more of a shared feeling between the two of them. I honestly thought Naruto was going to turn into a Norman Bates/Misery type obsessive boyfriend, which in turn make Sasuke the hero to protect from Sakura.
THanks again for clearing things up with the rewrite
THanks again for clearing things up with the rewrite
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March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Still loving this, hope we see more of it. I love that Naruto and Sakura are cheating on their traditional partners.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eh, Naruto does seem a little possessive, even for him. Oh well, I'm glad that it's still NaruSaku, lol.
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March 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope things go well for Naruto and Sakura.