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Uh oh. Though now I'm kind of worried about Sakura being caught between two over possesive men. I have to admit I love seeing this side of both Naruto and Sasuke. At first I was worried it would be like a pairing swap with these two couples. Now I'm glad it doesn't appear that way. I'm also happy to see someone else not a fan of Hinata. I don't hate her per se but I don't really like her. And I hate Naru/Hina with a passion. All that aside, loved this chapter. It's starting to show darker elements and I luff that in fics. PLease update soon

I really liked this chapter. Adding the lyrics in the middle was a nice touch, and they seemed to emphasize the scene that much more. Yamato MAY be OOC, but I'm not really sure, as he's kind of a mystery character I would think. Being blunt is how he is shown to be in the actual series though, so I think you got that part down.

The possessive nature of Naruto, the warnings of Yamato, and Sasuke's talk with Hinata are making future chapters look absolutely great. Again, great job with the chapter.

One word awesome. I'm still having a hard time getting it-I'm a little slow on the uptake. I'm still enjoying the story and I can't wait to find out more.
Rox

It was awesome. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
Rox

Another amazing chapter! I love how you write it with the flashbacks as Sakura was lying there. It's nice to see a jealous and paranoid Sasuke. Usually it's Sakura who is unsure of herself in her relationships with him. I'm loving this approach. I'm sensing that since he is jealous and already suspicous about these two, heads will roll when he realizes what has been happening. I would not want to be Sakura.... then again if I had Naruto and Sasuke fighting over me I think I might enjoy that for a second ^_^

I really didn't find the flashbacks confusing. The only part I had to reread to make sure was when Naruto said he loved her since they were children. At first I couldn't tell which one it was. Other than that everything else was crystal clear and perfect. It may have been a tad short, but it was written beautifully. It gave alot of info that made the story that much better.

Looking forward to more!!!

Oh, this is probably the best chapter so far! Very emotional and very sweet! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Another great chapter to the story. It may be short, but I think it was written well enough. And glad I could be of help.

Emotional chapter, and writer, eh? That's good, means your really getting into this story! But, I do feel sorry for the both of them though....

That was really good. Will you be telling how she and Naruto got together. Because they both seem semi-happy with their other relationships too. I smell disaster here. I can't wait to read about it.
Rox

damn thaat was awsome. i kant wait to see what happens next. that was a good twist. i thought fora second that you made naruto abusive and posesvie. but you fooled me. write on my wayward author