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for Love Fool

by UsagiKichi

person Lunar84
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I see you post a new chapter I feel like a kid in a candy store. Sad...

Anyway wow this was an emotional chapter! You've written it so well. It's written so well in depth and detail the reader can feel these emotions that Sakura is going through. Being torn between what's right and something she desperately needs. I truly feel bad for her.

Now she has seven days to be with him as she chooses. The problem is what if they get caught by Sasgay- err Sasuke or Hinata coming home early?
Or perhaps Sasuke and Hinata will find their way to one another on their mission. There are so many possibilities to this wonderful story. I'm sure no matter what the outcome it will be fantastic.

Looking forward to more!!!!!!!
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, very good, very good! Sorry the reviews late, but this story is coming along nicely, and believable! Thank you!
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I have been waiting so long for a NaruSaku where they are cheating on Sasuke and Hinata. Thank you for writing this.
person roxnroll
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I feel a heartbreak of mass proportions coming on. I can't wait to read all about it. Great job
Rox
person Lunar84
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I'm glad Sakura isn't just running to Naruto with open arms... right away. Makes things a tad more exciting. These two are on a dangerous path and I'm loving every second of it. I'm anxiously awaiting Sasuke and Hinata to find out. Ohh the drama. I'm lookinf forward to another update! Everything about this fic is perfect thus far. My ideal story!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOw. This is pretty good. A possibly mergered and seductive Naruto and a conflicted Sakura. Sasuke is also somewhat insecure in this and I think its great. I almost felt bad for Naruto at the end of this, but then realized: HEY! He was just with Hinata, then left with a smirk on his face. No wonder Yamato was trying to warn Sakura. That tricky kitsune is nothing but trouble!


Can't wait to find out what happens next, though. There's no hiding that bite mark from Sasuke, thats for sure. >:)
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Story is getting intense, so I'm definitely looking forward to the future chapters.
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Worse? This is a great plot line, and while it is a little overused, depending on the writer, its always different! I can't wait to see what you can come up with, because I love NaruSaku! Although there's going to be a LOT of pain, but as long as they love each other! Or, am I just being an idiot? I really do overthink things..... Oh well! Can't wait for more!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I like it! Usually hate the love triangles, but I really like the way you've done this. It is very... real.

Good job! Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well well well... This is turning out pretty well methinks. I must compliment you on your exquisite and intimate use of the english language and your incredibly descriptive writing. I much enjoyed reading this up unto this point. Won't you please write more? Bloody well done Usagi-san.

-Spartan