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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this. I really like the triangle going on here. She finally has Sasuke and now she wants Naruto. I can actually see that happening in the manga. Well update soon, you've got me hooked.
Rox
Rox
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this story is really incredible! Seriously, this fic is amazing so far and it only has two chapters. Everything flowed beautifully and the detail was superb. The heat was amazing between Naruto and Sakura when he returned from his mission. The intensity between them in the wine room was...WOW. I didn't notice any grammar or punctuation errors.
I want to say "thank you" for posting a Naru/Saku fic like this. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this couple. Not that I hate Saku/Sasu, but I only like it if it's written decently. I love the idea of these two going behind Hinata and Sasuke's back because they can't stay away from one another. I really hope you continue to write this into a longer fic. I'm looking forward to more updates. And a steamy smut scene or two ~_^
I want to say "thank you" for posting a Naru/Saku fic like this. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this couple. Not that I hate Saku/Sasu, but I only like it if it's written decently. I love the idea of these two going behind Hinata and Sasuke's back because they can't stay away from one another. I really hope you continue to write this into a longer fic. I'm looking forward to more updates. And a steamy smut scene or two ~_^
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic! Great job! I love the way you depict Naruto. In most fics, he is always protrayed as a "dobe". He so is not!!!
Write more...please!!!
Write more...please!!!
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February 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i sooo love the opening quote from the beatles!!!! kudos!