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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw that was soo sweet. Glad they both ended up happy!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was defintly sweet hehehe! Loved it!
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, just to let you know...I'm almost positive that keiko means practice, training, or study. Several Japanese-English dictionaries seem to agree with me. Beloved is actually more like koishii or saiai. Also, you may want to diversify your adjectives and dialogue choices. They seemed very run-of-the-mill.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SasuNaru hotness. Yes.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*After tissues, blood transfusion, and Minor heart attack.* ... Wow.......