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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope Hinata listens to Naruto and forgives him soon, the bitch Misako needs a Hyuuga style beat down.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Out of the two heart broken women, Hinata is definitely the smarter, more calculating, and political savvy one. With this one brief conversation, I can see Hinata putting all the pieces together as to how important the whore's visits and negotiations are to Konoha, plus the benefits of what their financial investment will bring. Although I have to say, she can feel as betrayed as she wants, but there was really no reason for Naruto to ever mention that he received a hand job from some random chick once while on a mission before he started dating her. I mean really, did she really need (or want) an itemized list of all the people he's ever been with and what they'd done? I don't think so. I'm sure it would have been appreciated for Naruto to have mentioned that he knew the two from a previous mission, but that kind of awkward situation is the kind of thing people generally avoid trying to talk about. >:/
I don't know.
Sasuke's a bastard and deserves to be put in the dog house he's in, but Naruto... he really did nothing wrong.
I don't know.
Sasuke's a bastard and deserves to be put in the dog house he's in, but Naruto... he really did nothing wrong.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you updated and it was awesome. Aw, no SasuSaku. I'll get over it.
Update soon.
Update soon.
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Men can be jerks, but we still love them... and we forgive when we love, even if it takes a while and a lot of probation.
I like your story, it's very real! And I trust you not to let Hinata rush into his arms just yet, she's still too hurt.
I like your story, it's very real! And I trust you not to let Hinata rush into his arms just yet, she's still too hurt.
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July 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude that rock please don't stop writing do the world a favor doooooooooon't stop really don't dude im totally seriuos
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July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the way you portrayed Ino, and I think that wasn't OOC at all. After all, she has been shown to be the tough chick who stands up for her friends in the manga. Sakura, though, takes too much shit from Sasuke and her emotions are betraying that genius brain of hers; maybe she should take lessons in tactics from Shika? All in, I really enjoy the tension of these new chapters and can't wait to see how your plot plays out - it's high school politics/office politics ninja style...
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG, dude i'm like in love with your story. I was like driving myself insane waiting for you to update. I bet your probably, i never seen this girl before and why hasnt she reviewed. I finished reading your story a long time ago. And when i was gonna review. My internet went out, cuz my dad didnt pay the bill. I'm here now and i promise to review every time.
Update soon plz!
Update soon plz!
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GO INO!!!! She is awesome. Everyone needs a friend like her. I'm glad that both girls have witnessed how the other girls were throwing themselves at their men. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Rox
Rox
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July 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ino was awesome in this!! Huzzah!!