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I want to see Hinata figure out what a bitch Misako is and then beat her down. I doubt Tsunade would be happy to find out the girl is ruining the relationship her adoptive little brother is in!

Starts shivering at author`s remark. I am actually quite surprised that Sakura had so much of a restraint over her emotions, and didn`t just punch her through a few walls. TZhese next chapters are probably going to be hell for yuna and Misako, ah well they had it coming.Though a scheming Hinata? Very unusual, though Iam really looking forward to that, and thus the next chapter.

Awesome chapter update soon.

This is definitely one of the only stories I've enjoyed with original characters.

Hinata is just too sweet & Sakura is so action-packed!

I'll keep my eyes peeled.

the story is awesome please post more

I absolutely loooooove this story!!! I honestly think the naruto producers should actually make this into a movie--but that's just my opinion. This is always the first story I check for updates when I visit AFF.net.I just wanted to know that someone is hanging on each word waiting to see what happens next is the story.

On a different note(constructive criticism), I realize that hinata is very innocent, almost to the point of being naive, but she is also very smart, as is sakura. Between what has happened to the both of them and the way the sisters are acting ex/ smirking, taunting, etc., they should be able to figure out that the two sisters are no where near as innocent as they try to appear. They both are also skilled ninja who are taught and trained to read expressions and body language. All I am saying is that they should know that the sisters play a larger part in the problem than those innocent voices let on, even if they are having love trouble.

P/S: Sorry if that appeared more flamey than I wanted, but my mind just wouldn't turn off. I really do love the story 8^)

this just does not bode well for yuna.

Oh what a great story you have going so far. Yuna deserved that coffee. I just hope she doesn't get all spiteful but I'm sure she will...OOH! The plot thickens! Can't wait for the update!

Wow. This story went from funny and a little naughty to a full-blown drama fic. It's interesting, so don't get me wrong, I enjoyed reading this one. You should post it on another site though so that it's easier to find your story. AFF is a pain to work with. @_@ LiveJournal would probably be a good place, or ff.net if they still don't give a damn about the ratings anymore. I remember reading a few dirty ones over there.

And did Sasuke fuck her a second time? I guess I should've remembered that part... hahah.

I can't wait to read more and the direction its heading in is looking great. Great work.

So far so good ^-^, Though, I do believe in normal circumstances Naruto would have a least a -little- more will then you've given him... after all he was tailing Ero-Sennin for ages....