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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, i can`t wait for the girls to kick some ass,preferably into a bloody pulp-well it is what Yuna and misako deserve, right?- after heraring the twa biggest idiots in the history of mankind out (They too deserve a thump on their head). Please continue with this superb stor, it makes one feel what`s going on, all those emotions are so vivid, so please continue.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First off: Thanks so much for the review! I was waiting for it for some time now. ^^
You're story is great, the plot and everything are very creative and entertaining. I think that because you're writing from experience it makes it more realistic and fun to read. As for the InoKiba stuff, I just have to say I loved it. The pairing makes sense and I would like to see more of it. I hope you update soon, as soon as you can! Anyways, I'll shup up now... lol...
You're story is great, the plot and everything are very creative and entertaining. I think that because you're writing from experience it makes it more realistic and fun to read. As for the InoKiba stuff, I just have to say I loved it. The pairing makes sense and I would like to see more of it. I hope you update soon, as soon as you can! Anyways, I'll shup up now... lol...
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If it really is true what you say about writing from personal experience, then it is quite clear as why it is so detailled ad well written. I hope you write the next chapter soon, for a few more chapters of this calibre and the story will soar.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, girls can be so evil. I've known quite a few skanks in my day who live for the drama. Nothing but trouble.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, I hate the fact hinata and sakura one of my favorite characters got hurt but I could feel there pain, I REALLY RESALLY HOPe that they don't go back with naruto and sasuke, I think hinata and shino and sakura and neji together for at least a little bit will be really nice, and make the boys regret what they did. otherwise good job on the story, cause right now thee isn't alot of good fanfic's of naurto out.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter update soon.
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July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I can't wait for those girls to get what's coming to them.
Rox
Rox
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's not everyday a story pulls me in enough to break my heart. You, my lady, have a gift. Never stop writing.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... You know what? The story is really well written, I must say. Really good. And the OCs are SO good, that...
Well... I must say, I like Misa and Yuna much more than Sakura and Hinata. Seriously. I do. A lot more. I don't know if you like them more than Hinata and Sakura as well, but I must say that it's really hard to create such OCs.
My biggest hope for this fic is for it to end with a NaruOC, at least. Because I like very much her characterization and how you described Naruto's reactions and feelings about her. He isn't so stupid as to screw up just because of sexual attraction his relationship with the only girl who has ever loved him. I think you should at least give it a thought, because creating good OCs in a fanfiction (especially a Naruto fanfiction, nowadays T_T) is a great thing.
I mean, they're not bad girls. That much I can see. If they really like Naruto and Sasuke, that is. They're manipulative and seductive, yes, but if that's the case, they're nothing more but girls who do everything the can to get the guy they like. It's as simple as that. They just show some backbone. Because, seriously... Nowadays no one respect the 'taken' rule anymore. It's sad, but it's like that. I hope to see more and soon.
Meinos Kaen
P.S.: If you had already planned for the fic to end with Canon pairings, you could always write different finals for the story. In a chapter the canon pairings final, in the other the OC pairings final. And maybe throw in a NaruOC+SasuSaku and a NaruHina+SasuOC. Because, with the work you do with the characters' personality and behaviour, I think that the finals to look up more would be these last two, with everyone's else reactions and such.
Well... I must say, I like Misa and Yuna much more than Sakura and Hinata. Seriously. I do. A lot more. I don't know if you like them more than Hinata and Sakura as well, but I must say that it's really hard to create such OCs.
My biggest hope for this fic is for it to end with a NaruOC, at least. Because I like very much her characterization and how you described Naruto's reactions and feelings about her. He isn't so stupid as to screw up just because of sexual attraction his relationship with the only girl who has ever loved him. I think you should at least give it a thought, because creating good OCs in a fanfiction (especially a Naruto fanfiction, nowadays T_T) is a great thing.
I mean, they're not bad girls. That much I can see. If they really like Naruto and Sasuke, that is. They're manipulative and seductive, yes, but if that's the case, they're nothing more but girls who do everything the can to get the guy they like. It's as simple as that. They just show some backbone. Because, seriously... Nowadays no one respect the 'taken' rule anymore. It's sad, but it's like that. I hope to see more and soon.
Meinos Kaen
P.S.: If you had already planned for the fic to end with Canon pairings, you could always write different finals for the story. In a chapter the canon pairings final, in the other the OC pairings final. And maybe throw in a NaruOC+SasuSaku and a NaruHina+SasuOC. Because, with the work you do with the characters' personality and behaviour, I think that the finals to look up more would be these last two, with everyone's else reactions and such.