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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic. Besides a few grammar mistakes here and there and a few extra words, this fic totally blows my mind. Being a guy and having gone through something similar to what Naruto went through, I gotta say you portrayed it well(somewhat close to my own actions, a bit creepy but good nonetheless). Can't wait for the next chapter, got me on the end of my seat here.
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June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm very surprised(and pleased, of course) that you're updating this story so quickly. I do have a couple of points to nitpick about, though:
Last chapter, you said that we would see a) Sakura's reaction to finding out who Sasuke had slept with, and b) the sisters' true faces. Unfortunately, we have yet to see either(unless I'm not reading into the fic enough). Hopefully, those little irritations will be rectified in your next chapter.
Other than that, please continue! This is one of my favorite Naruto fanfics of all time!
Last chapter, you said that we would see a) Sakura's reaction to finding out who Sasuke had slept with, and b) the sisters' true faces. Unfortunately, we have yet to see either(unless I'm not reading into the fic enough). Hopefully, those little irritations will be rectified in your next chapter.
Other than that, please continue! This is one of my favorite Naruto fanfics of all time!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay yay yay!!
Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!
You are wonderful!
You're right about the POV change, and I'm actually glad you did it. I hope you update soon ^^
Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!
You are wonderful!
You're right about the POV change, and I'm actually glad you did it. I hope you update soon ^^
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story gives me the chills!
In a very good way though!!
Sakura should beat up Yuna, really realy realy bad, she deserves it. lol
Again thanks for updating so soon!!
In a very good way though!!
Sakura should beat up Yuna, really realy realy bad, she deserves it. lol
Again thanks for updating so soon!!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, the change of POV is certainly an interesting twist and I am now vey interested in how the story will continue. Please update soon.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While the POV change was a little jarring, I'm sure we'll get used to it by the next chapter. Also, the only mistake I saw constantly was you used you're instead of your to indicate possession. Other than that, great chapter. Update soon!
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June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I'm glad that she found out it was Yuna.
Rox
Rox
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! Trouble all around. Love sure has to answer for a lot. Now Kiba and Ino are in it as well. Yay o for it, the next chapter should be very interesting, so post it
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.