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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I really enjoyed it.
Rox
Rox
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've definitely gotten my interest with this fic. I had my suspicions about those girls too, and the last chapter confirms my thoughts. I look forward to the happy ending you're promising, as well as the 'just desserts' those sisters should be getting.
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is definitely intriguing. You bring up several issues not normally found in fanfics. This chapter, while shorter than normal, was definitely needed. Now, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. Please try and update before the end of the week!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heck yes! Quick update! lol
This is getting ver very interesting!!! I'm enjoying every second of it! Go Sakura! Now Sasuke really will have to work his ass off if he ever wishes to be with her again, mwuahahaha! lol I'm so evil. Again, thank you so much for updating this marvelous story, okay?
Update soon!
This is getting ver very interesting!!! I'm enjoying every second of it! Go Sakura! Now Sasuke really will have to work his ass off if he ever wishes to be with her again, mwuahahaha! lol I'm so evil. Again, thank you so much for updating this marvelous story, okay?
Update soon!
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Dude!! I can't believe Sasuke actually did it, I can't believe he was weak enough to fall for that!! WOW!!! I mean, it was temptation, but the bastard didn't think about Sakura! lol
I have to say, I'm dissapointed in that, him falling so easily. lol
Anyway, thank you for updating, please update again soon. I wan't to know hoe MAD (not to mention hurt) poor Sakura will be ^^
I have to say, I'm dissapointed in that, him falling so easily. lol
Anyway, thank you for updating, please update again soon. I wan't to know hoe MAD (not to mention hurt) poor Sakura will be ^^
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh I hope, theymake up with their girlfriend, I mean especially Naruto. He pourshis heart out to Misa and she does this, what a bitch, and sasuke too, for once he is honestto his Sakuraand what does he get. Those girl just played with them, I just hope they wring their necks
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter update soon.
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A great cliffhanger. Overall, a good chapter. Good use of dialogue and a great use of plot anger and sadness. Let's see what happens next!
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
in the first chapter, is did you get Misa from deathnote? also your a good writer
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June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter so far. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Rox
Rox