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for All the Small Things

by lexjamandme

person chineseartist
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
... that is f'ed up man *shakes head* and they were there for so many years, thats real sad
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yet another amazing chapter. I truly believe you are incapable of writing a bad chapter or story. All of your stuff is amazing. I especially love DMZ at the moment. Can't wait for your next incredible update. Keep up the good work!
person Telpei
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mou...this story is so angsty!! But in a good way. I love the way you write Sasuke and Naruto's relationship :) Very cute!! Is Sasuke ever going to say the three little words??? I think Naruto might have a heart attack if he did ^_^ I love Naruto-the-doctor persona!! He's so intimidating hehe ^^ Take that, Uchiha, you're not the only one who can make sick bastards tremble in fear! (Actually, I kind of think Sasuke may have gotten a little aroused when Naruto so forcefully threatened Aya's stepfather. Kinky bastard).

Please update soon!!! I anxiously await the next chapter!
person Vox
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
1. I hate you. Poor Naru.
2. I love you. You updated.
3. I hate you. You didn't update The DMZ yet.
4. Itachi is an EMT?
5. Updating more often gets you cookies.

Love!
person lo
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, you are very good at creating different situations to further your plot. I can't wait to see more.
person Lepon
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woooow!
So many deep emotions! And they are so true!
It's amazing!

Thanks for the story and this warmth in my chest I have after reading these chapters ^_^
person digiditz
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, as always. I'm a die hard ER fan so medical inspired drama is just my thing.
person bebop
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
honesty it's amazing. so easy to read, so so easy. i don't even like ER/doctor dramas and i couldn't stop reading. from the breaks in the chapter layout to the flowing dialogue to the great use of each character in the naruto universe - it all makes for a great read. i can't wait to continue. go team.
person Imagy
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O me, O my
wonderfullness on a bun, hun ;D
I can't wait to see what happens next~!