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for All the Small Things

by lexjamandme

person nlb
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are really, truely gifted in writing modern day Naruto AU stories. That and your writing style is captivating.
person Word_Slave
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this one!!! Thanks for writing it and I can't wait for more. Um, do Naruto and Sasuke take the twins?????
Slave
person Jelp
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't read fics that have Sasuke and Naruto already in a relationship, but I really like the tensions between the two. It's like they're not quite all the way there as a couple yet. Hmm...I wonder if Naruto and Sasuke can take care of twins? ^_^

Also, I'm sorry to be so pesky, but I love this movie, so I felt I would share. When you said "ala Fred Astaire in ‘Singing in the Rain’", it's really Gene Kelly who is the singer/dancer in the movie. Sorry to be a pest, but it's one of my all time favorite movies!

I'm looking forward to updates on this fic. I'm routing for Sasuke and Naruto taking the twins! Woot! Though that could cause drama if the family is located...ah well. ^_^ Good fic. ~ Jelp
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the useless interns... lol Man oh man, it's doctors like sasuke that make me DREAD internship :S poor poor glasses intern girl, just need to go home shake it off and try again tomorrow! *thumbs up* LOL Stupid sasuke, we all have to start somewhere

oh! and i laughed so hard at naruto intubating the little girl with ease after the 'great uchiha' had been trying for so long

Anyways i like this story kudos to you, reading or watching anything medically related usually isn't my bag baby. I was actually reading for the naruto sas interaction and figured i'd just gloss over the med stuff but it was really interesting, as A&E tends to be haha

Was wondering what kind of doctor is sasuke, like what specialty?
person Mirayuki
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow!
I was looking for a story that featured Sasuke and Naruto in a hospital, but not the doctor-patient-relationship but both as doctors/paramedics.
And today I just happened to find yours, and a brilliant one at that.
Very good work!
Can't wait to read more.

Mi-chan
person beautifullove348
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh very exciting and interesting! I'm defnitely hooked even if this story only has one chapter :)

I absolutely love your writing style and how there was so much action in the first chapter. Also, how you portrayed Naruto and Sasuke was perfect. Naruto crying over the kids and Sasuke feeling exhilirated over defeating death. I loved it, absolutely loved it.

Please update soon :)
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was very well written. so far it makes me sad I will not have access to the web for a little while. I am curious about the twins. How would those two doctors handle taking them in if the opportunity presented itself? I mean CAN two doctors at a county hospital do that? Might strain their relationship too much but if it came to pass I am sure you would figure out a way to make the story work. I hope to see an update soon.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah another great story to watch for.

I love it.

I look forward to your next update.
person Imagy
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...angst...
serious angst
but I like it ^o^
It's definately a fun read~!
:D
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww. This is cute..<3

Umm, there were minor spelling errors, however..but no biggie!

Please update soon!! hehe