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You've missed something so obvious. Doctors in a hospital always know they need proof in sexual assaults (rape kits and the such). And lawyers especially know the importance of evidence. You didn't have anybody photograph and/or document the bite marks on Sasuke's shoulder. Was that on purpose-so they wouldn't have any proof? It would be hard to justify that with the intelligence all the people concerned have. Especially the administrator (Tsunade) would want and demand proof so that Orochimaru couldn't counter sue the hospital. I love the family you've made with the 3 year old twins and Sasu/Naru_and the daddy/mommy is cute. I also don't understand how your main characters could justify letting Orochimaru go on sexually assaulting with body or talk; just because they thought he was important to the hospital. They were willing to put the physical and emotional well being of other probable victims as less important than the financials of the hospital. They seem to have to much character and care for their loved ones too much to be willing to risk them being exposed to Orochimaru. Sasuke never thought that Naruto might be a victim before Naruto brought it up to him_the way you have Sasuke constantly thinking about how much he loves Naruto and how much naruto means to him and all that other mushy stuff__it seems that he would think of doing anything possible to protect his Dobe from any perceived threats_and that he didn't think Naruto could have been a victim until Naruto mentioned it seemed unlikely.

I just love the Uchiha family in this story! The way the act and think is just priceless!
Poor Naruto, his masculinity was questionned throughout the story, but what makes some cry make others laugh lol.
I also find the twins adorable! And Obito is really well imagined. The only thing I felt was lacking was some Gaara/Neiji... hehe I love that pair!

Thanks for the great story, there is not enough of them on the net!

god
i love this story so much i can't even describe it!!!
I finally finished it today and i was sad but happy at the same time.
The part in the airplane where Sasuke and Naruto were caught in the bathroom, hilarious!
there were some parts where i cried like a baby this story is full of so many emotions i love it love it!!

I. Am. Addicted to this story. I would have complemented the two of you, no wait. Praiseed the very air you both breathe, on every one of preceding fantastically long chapter, but sadly I could not *cries* the next chapter button was too tempting. It was like "click me, click me".

haha! that was great! ending with the rain just like the first chap

I love this story! It's beautiful. I'm trying to remember all the things I found so wonderful about it while I was reading, but there were just too many things. You gave it detail, a thrilling plot, and lengthy chapters, to name a few. I was hooked in your tale. Thanks for sharing your story!

When I saw there was an update for All the Small Things, I straightened up in my chair and if I had a tail, it would have been wagging happily. :D

And then I realized I forgot to leave a review for chapter 13...it would have been something along the lines of "epilogueepilogueepilogueepilogueepilogueepiloguewhere'stheepilogueIwanttoreaditlikenow" heh heh...but, that would have been a completely useless review so I hope to redeem myself with this chapter's review...though I must mention that I laughed my ass off whenever the mention of the long pink boa plush was read. And Sasuke's proposal to Naruto made me cry.

*starts reading the epilogue while trying not to bounce in the chair excitedly*

'Naruto was glad for the third time that night that Sasuke’s parents took the twins for the night.'

--Me too! The kids would have SO heard all that no matter HOW reinforced the walls were.

Naruto scrambled over Sasuke, kneeing him in the gut and picked up the phone. His chest was heaving with anger, “I HAVE A DAMN DICK!” he screamed slamming the phone down.

--*dies laughing*

“I’m not sure they had Uchihas in mind when they created such vague vows…” Leaning over, Naruto kissed Sasuke’s pale shoulder. “Why did I marry you again?” He asked closing his eyes.

--A ha ha ha ha ha ha...probably not!

“Damn, Gaara, her excuse was that it was the right size. Like she was searching the world for the perfect thing to cram up her nose.”

--*tears of myrth* I can't say I did any better when I was a kid.

...until Konohamaru’s girlish and horrified scream reached their ears.

--*nearly falls out of chair laughing* Cosmos, that was so funny! I could practically HEAR the scream.

Madara smiled gently trying out the new ‘loving smile’ that he had recently learned from his new DVD purchase. The smile slipped when Sasuke quieted the table by asking, “Uncle, are you having a heart attack?”

--Ok, I burst out laughing and really loudly at that. Late at night. Hopefully not waking anyone.

Obito shook his head, eyes sparkling with mirth and happiness as he pried the fingers away. “The bottom line is my sex kitten has agreed to marry me.”

--Aww! Yay, that made me teary eyed.

Aww, the end of the end...I loved this fic so much. If I could afford it, I'd print it all out to carry with me everywhere and read it over and over again. *sigh* But, I guess I can settle for late night reading when I can't get to sleep.

I love this story! I liked how you ended it the way you began it, with the rain. I can't wait until your next story! Thanks!!

Just so you know, I adore this story a lot. This and the demilitirized (know ive spelt it wrong)zone are a couple of my fav stories, due to humour, sarcastic wit and fab storylines. I only with you would write a preqel to this story, with the hints that you have already used. I would love to see how they got together.

Rie
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I have followed this story for quite a while and this is my first time reviewing. I have to give you many cudos. This is an amazing story. The characters are sooooooooo real. I have cried, smiled, forwned, and laughed hysterically. You truly have an amazing talent!

On a lighter note - How I would love to see an side story or sequel focusing on Kakashi and Obito. OH MY GOODNESS - I have nearly peed in my pants laughing hysterically at the interactions between these two.
- "The Doofus", "Sparky", The whole John Travolta "Staying Alive" thing, the lollipop, Kakashi falling out of the chair or the near colonoscopy, therapy, the fearsome five- IT JUST NEVER ENDED! OH, then the fact that they are getting married! I bet you could go on for days about that!

Anyway - luved it!