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you know, i usually fear epilogues attached to awesome stories, but yours rocked the house, babe! what an awesome ending and so cute. you are so talented. oh, and i expect my autographed copy in my mailbox by the end of the week. lol!

I read the 1st chapter when this story started. I was not impressed at all. So I never continued it. When I saw that this story again & it said complete I skimmed over the last chapter & it seems like its a great story so I'm going to read it again from the beginning.
I doubt I'll be disappointed. I'll let you know what I think in a couple of days.

you guys did one heck of a job this was one great story. i can't wait to see what you come up with next.

I saw that you wrote and posted the Epilogue and i felt like doing backflips because i was so happy!
I've loved this story from the very beginning to the end...the humor, the sexiness, the love, the action..
it's all in this story and makes one hell of a great read. I'd recommend it to anyone without hesitation.
The Epilogue was perfect, everything that i had hoped for and more. What a great way to wrap up such an awesome story.
I hope you never change your ideas or your writing style because you are most definitely one of my all time favorite SasuNaru Authors.


Your devoted fan
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lmao i loved it! im glad it was put up FINALLY! lol. just teasing, i laughed the whole time i read it

Aaaah! Okay, great update;) But did you mention a prequel!??! This story is just screaming for a prequel! I'd thought it more than once, I'm so glad to see I'm not the only one. Oh, now I'm excited.

Okay, yes, great great story;) I'm in love with every bit of it--and I am NOT a Sasu/Naru fan. I like to see Sasuke give up control usually but this was an exception. Amazing story, everything about it.

Bravo!

Awww. Thank you so much for posting this fan fic. You did an excellent job of creating a believable realistic AU that one is easily sucked into. Thanks for posting the epilogue, although I'm going to miss this one. Please continue to post and write when inspiration hits.

Hello *waves* I'm a big fan of yours following this story...along with any other story you've ever written :D
I hope i'm not pestering you by asking this (if i am then please forgive me?) but you are still planning on having
an epilogue for this right? Oh goodness, i really hope so. I'm very eager to read it..obviously lol.

Thank you for writing!
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Adorable story, thanks so much for sharing it with us, I will look for more of your work in the future.

(Yuri is a pretty common Japanese name. 百合 it means lily. Honestly, I don't know that the Japanese even use yuri to describe f/f manga/doujinshi. I do know that they don't use the word yaoi very often. Yaoi=1970's amateur pwp doujinshi)

Well it took me one day and one night to read thru all of the 13 ch. During those hours of completely devoted reading I suffer, cry, laugh, giggle, jump.............. as a stupid fan girl because of the wonderful way in which you portrayed each character.
What was my favorite thing about this story. Well shit were to begging, it was way to perfect and I don't know how to pick my number one Favorite moment. But here are somethings I really really enjoy.
1- Kakashi nickname for Naruto (Sparky) it fits perfectly.
2- Sasuke character. You just blow me away with his role in this fic.
3- Itashi, God I almost die and when to heaven when I saw Itashi role in this story. He is one of my favorite characters, and is great to see someone who can put a real human side to him.
4- The fearsomefive lol, they were hilarious.
5- Toys R Us............... it got me laughing for a good time.
6- The pairings, OMG you are a genius. It opened my perspective to so many pairing that have never crossed my mind. Itashi/Hinata WOW **
Iruka/Asuma never in my crazies dream
Kakashi/Obito perfect
7- Your sense of humor. Your characters all share the best sarcastic sense of humor I have ever read. For that my friend I love you.
8- Sai and Madara son/father relationship, and the Yakusa theme.
9- How the Uchihas call each other as Cousin/big brother/little brother............ damn even Naruto was considered a Ushiha. Can wait to see how are the fearsomfive going to call Kakashi, and his reaction to it.
10- Hospital atmosphere. You just managed to fit each character perfectly to their jobs.

Did like
1- Orochimaru............ I hate the snake bastard
2- Sakura dieing. I know she didn't have that big of a role in the story, but still it was kind of sad seeing her die =(

Finally questions.
Is there going to be a second part to this story?
Will Naruto start a OR career now that Oroshimaru is gone?
Where the hell is KIBA, ANKO, KURENAI, GENMA, GAI????

Sorry for the long review, this is the first time I write something so long to any author. Your story is just so good that I feel I have to comment on everything and this is not even half of what I think. Keep writing, you have a wonderful gift that not every one is lucky to have. Thank you very much for sharing your imagination with us.