rate_review Reviews

My mother is a labor and delivery nurse and she is always going on about how working during a full moon is killer. I thought it was cool that you mentioned that ;). I enjoy this story and I'm glad you decided to write it. I also like DMZ and For the love of his son- awesome stories! Do you send out email updates? If you do, angelreader89@aol.com is my address. Thanks I can't wait for more of your stories!!!

that last scene was so cute. The way he proposed was great. I trully love this story. Can't wait till the next chapter.

Apart from this review, only one other has been written by me on AFF. Not because I don't read a lot of stories (I do), not because the stories weren't worth reviewing (they were), but I never really felt compelled to express to the authors what I was sure others had in better and more abundant words.
This time is different.
I cannot, and probably won't be able to no matter how hard I try, express how much I enjoyed reading All the Small Things. Action, emotions and (what else? haha) sex were all incredibly well balanced. The characters were extremely well thought out and they acted and evolved in a way that was uniquely theirs throughout the entire story. And the way the both of you write is incredible. Yes the story had a happy ending. So what? Some people think that happy endings are cliché and over-used. I say to hell with them. Because I've been sitting here for three hours and a half straight reading your story, and god had it not ended happily I would've cried (it's bad enough I almost did a few times while reading the last chapters). The whole damn thing makes you want to read more and more without ever stopping. So yeah, it was a happy ending, but it was also one hell of a read.
This might sound silly, but thanks for writing such a great fanfiction. Thanks for putting in the work and time that is reflected in each chapter. I don't know if you'll ever read this, or if you two will even care, but I do, because such great talent should always be recognized.
Take care, the both of you, and whoever helped you work on this
Best regards
Tsunamis

OMG you made me cry so many times already... I love you XD #Huggles# This is one of the best fics I have ever EVER read - datte bayo!

That was an amazing piece of writing. Thank you so much for posting it, please continue to share your talent.

i just wanted to say, that that was the most beautiful proposal i have ever read or seen or heard about. i was getting all teary-eyed. i still want to cry over it.

but this whole story was wonderful and sexy and so very, very good. i'm a person of very few words, but those are sincere. you've got talent, and i love everything you do. i'm looking forward to the epilogue and your next work.

Just so you know 'Yuri", in addition to being the japanese term for girl/girl relationships, is a girl's name meaning 'lily'. Not really sure how it came to have its more well known definition, but there you go. I absolutely love your stories, by the way. Keep up the excellent work.

I was left breathless with this chapter! And!!!!! Oh my gosh! Sakura didn't die!! Yay!! No one died [I am not counting Orichimaru because he is simply not human.] Oh my gosh! Next chapter is the ep! It's almost over!! I think I'm going to cry now!!

-Damp

*sniff* how sweet! was that the epilogue? or has it yet to come out?

If it makes you feel better there are kids out here in Asia named Yuri I have at least 5 and I am in Korea plus I believe a few have that name in Japan. But ya it does mean gay for female as well. LOL I think I stated I was yuri in several of my stories. Thought you knew. Either way I have to say there are only three authoresses that will cause me to damn near break my neck to read their updates and you are one of them. I can't wait to see the update and pray you have something else under your sleeve. Your writing skills are impeccable. Ja!