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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so love all your stories! i'll make this short cause i'll be repetitive otherwise. thank you again for your awesome writing! probably will pass on the epilogue though, but then again maybe not. ;-)
take care and see you soon!
madeline.harris@hotmail.com
take care and see you soon!
madeline.harris@hotmail.com
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY~!!!!!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods......There are not enough words for me to tell you HOW MUCH THIS FIC MEANS TO ME! It's my absolute favorite and I wish it will never end. It has the whole package that I always dream of in a fic. Beautiful work! I teared up so badly on the ending. Sasuke's proposal tore my heart open. That was THE MOST romantic ending of this chappie I have ever read. I' btwm seriously going to cry when the ending will come. But I shall treasure each word and drag it as long as possible. Hopefully there will be many oneshots afterwards? *bats lashes hopefully* Kisame had me LOLing on his trip to the toy store. Can I say instant classic? XD
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for once again wrapping things up so perfectly.
And BTW Kisame in Toys-R-Us was the best thing ever. No contest.
And BTW Kisame in Toys-R-Us was the best thing ever. No contest.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
There were many touching moments in chapter 13. I loved them all. But my favorites were when Sasuke woke up and called for Naruto, yanking him into bed with him and soothed him when he started to cry and get upset. And when Sasuke proposed to Naruto on the Hospital roof under the moonlight...So romantic. As usual the humor was well written and much appreciated. I like how the twins took an instant shine to Kisame. I'm really looking forward to reading the epilogue.
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the most beautiful proposal I've ever heard. Seen. Read. Whatever.
Just.. Beautiful!
Just.. Beautiful!
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July 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries*..That was the sweetest proposal ever! I was so caught in it that it felt like i was being asked. You are wonderful ^_^
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you're just awesome and I love you.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's ending again.
Once again I am feeling loss.
Lex, you have an amazing gift for creating a world and drawing your readers within...I'm flabbergasted each time I've come to the end of one of your fics, and realize that I feel as if I have been in another place with Sasuke and Naruto, and now I have to go back. I am perpetually reluctant to leave this place.
Another winner, not that anyone is surprised.
Once again I am feeling loss.
Lex, you have an amazing gift for creating a world and drawing your readers within...I'm flabbergasted each time I've come to the end of one of your fics, and realize that I feel as if I have been in another place with Sasuke and Naruto, and now I have to go back. I am perpetually reluctant to leave this place.
Another winner, not that anyone is surprised.
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July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolute best chapter of cuteness! Sasuke waking up, the kids and the marriage proposal were all so BREATH TAKINGLY CUTE! And so very very intense.
How Sasuke described his "proposal" was so romantic I almost fainted. So utterly beautiful. I can't wait for the epilogue.
How Sasuke described his "proposal" was so romantic I almost fainted. So utterly beautiful. I can't wait for the epilogue.