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for All the Small Things

by lexjamandme

person Imagy
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OKAY, SO
I love your stories
and I seriously hope that they (the victims) don't die
not that I'll stop loveing your stories if they do die
I'll just be really sad
and I know that Kyuubi is the evil demon that "infects" Naruto in the manga,
but in Japanese folklore there is another fox demon that actually posseses people called a "Ninko"
just to let you know
and
I can't wait to see what'll happen next~!
'til then, babe! ^o^
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let them die
person Nibiki
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GYAAAAHHHHH! >_< <_< >_< >_> >_< ::shakes head repeatedly:: An even worse (better!) cliffhanger than the last chapter! GEH!.... But I did do a lil' dance in my chair when I saw that you had updated. So, they caught symptoms one and two and now the fourth, so they missed the third or is the vomiting and fever symptoms three and four? Bleh, must update SOON! .... Please?
person kneazlegurl125
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg, i'm a new reader to your lovely collection of fanfiction and i have to say you are one of my new favorite fanfic writers. i find myself coming back to read and reread parts of your lovely stories everyday. i think i'm getting obsessed. anyway that last chapter was...heart wrenching yet very invigorating most for naruto and his badass words against fugaku ^^ oh i can't wait to see how this is gonna come out. same goes with DMZ. i can't wait for that epilogue.
person Anon
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You da bomb!

thank you thank you thank you
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SUSPENSE! Evil, evil cliffie.

Loved this chapter. You really know how to keep your readers barely breathing. It almost made me cry when Sasuke was falling asleep and Naruto was there. So beautiful. Definitely Naruto and the Uchihas to the rescue. OROCHIMARU IS GOING DOWN!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon :)
person Damp
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Talk about pressure!! Oh noes! Only two more symptoms before death!! EEEEEK!!!!!!!

-Damp *runs around in circles*
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
fuck. this makes me want to cry and yet laugh at the way the itatchi and the others are acting. go naruto!
person digiditz
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure even Fluffy is going to be enough to save you if/when you start killing off the people in that room.
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One of the best stories I've read here. Sweet, funny and exciting. Very well written. MORE PLEASE!!!