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for Hidden Within Your Heart

by Lady1Monkey

person Chloé
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey :)
Sorry for the mistakes, I'm French... I decide to post a review because I saw that you didn't update since 2008... I really love your story, so it will be great if you can continue this story ! Honestly, it's really great ! You have to write the continuation !
I hope you understood me...
Anyway, thank you for writing this fic' and for reading my review !
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
s/he is suuuuuuuuuuuch a ditz. Is the regular Naruto that much of a blond? lol
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRR!!! Cliffhangers!!!! You had better update quickly!!!!
schedule November 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got no idea how happy I am that this fic isn't abandoned. This is totally one of my favorite fics here at AFF, it's even on my profile over recommended fics, I really really like it. And that's why it made me disappointed to see that although it isn't abandoned, there isn't a new chapter.
I hope that you'll contine with this because it is one of a kind. Don't listen to people who say bad things about it, they're wrong. So hopefully update soon.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
person asm613
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Terrible grammar. Terrible story. Confusing and makes no sense.
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Squeee,loving the new chapters & all the new twists. I hope ya do get to add Itachi in, Naru-chan should be swamped in men,oh yes!
person catch-katch
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol, man, i love this fic so much! the style of writing takes a little while to get used to, but it's totally hilarious >_<. i love all the random, rambling solioques. i want to know what happens next! update at the speed of light! go! ten out of ten for plot and humour *thumbs up*. keep it up.
person Vegimeat
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o_o please update, I cheack this story daily to see if it is all happy and updated. D: I must know what happens!!!! -spazztical- So the moral of the story is... UPDATE!
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, Naruto's going to protect himself. If the dummy thought it through he would let the bushin be the girl. But then that wouldn't be as much fun for us.
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Garra's a jerk but I love that he's after Naruto affection too. (If not his affections then his ass. Lol) Can't wait to read more.
=)