rate_review Reviews

When will the cat be out of the bag? Naruto can't marry Sasuke without him finding out right?! The sex thing would be interesting without knowing . . . @_@ *Snicker* How would Sasuke continue the family line? Although marrying Naruto would piss Sasuke dad off! This story is great! Hoping for more soon, love the story.

Continue. Yay, a fight for Naruto!

I love it! Keep writing!

Oh poor Naru (shivers) even though Gaara is cool he is quite creepy i loved the 4,5 & 6 chaps ^^

can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!

Hmmm. It looks like Sasuke has an idea of what Gaara tried to do to Nao...er...Naruto. I wonder how he will retaliate against his rival. ~ Jelp

Gah! I loved Gaara's reaction!!!! He sees right through him and likes him anyway!!! X)


Now one mystery remains.... what was Sasuke doing in the bathroom! O_O

xan't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!

Garra has arrived! I can't wait to see what trouble happens next. I love this story can't wait for more.
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In response to your comment having nothing to do with the story: Meh. Who can figure people. I think it really depends on the person. I know people who will comment on any little or big thing you do (new hat, new hair, new hair color, new shoes...) and people who will never say a damn thing. I think the later just don't comment because either A) they don't notice/care or B) don't feel its really their place to say anything. Good or bad. Of course, I suppose there is also option C) whatever you did look terrible and they're just trying to be polite and not say anything about it... but lets just disregard that idea at the moment. Heh. Either way, as long as you like whatever changes you made -- thats the important thing, right? Not that a statement like that doesn't seem like a cop-out, cause I mean c'mon, we all want to be noticed... but it is true. If they don't like it - fuck 'em! (Whatever it is, you know, since you only vaguely alluded to it.)

In response to your story: Great chapter. I'm all excited now to see what happens when Gaara and Naruto finally cross paths. The world of this story is a tad strange, since its very AU and none of the characters are ninja, yet Naruto retains his ninja powers of transformation. I also picked up in this chapter (of course, I could be reading too much into it) that Naruto has super sensitive hearing which could possibly be a fox trait. Also, he named his "mother" Kyuubi and took the last name Kitsune... so is it possible that in this story he's still a jinchuriki?? (cheer!) And if so, is Gaara also still one and that the reason his servants fear him? This adds a level of anticipation to this already great story that makes me look extra forward to the next chapter. Of course, as I mentioned before, I could also be looking to deep into things and Naruto still just the orphaned child of noble parents (thus the reason people curse him for "lying" about his name).


Gah! Hurry up with the next chapter! The anticipation is killing me. ^^