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for Hidden Within Your Heart

by Lady1Monkey

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I HAVE to have more of this story!! It is good! So very good! Please update soon, I really want to know what happens next!! *Puppy eyes* More please.
person Jelp
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have a very interesting story here. There's a good bit that needs to be edited grammatically, but overall a good story. ~ Jelp
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens! I love the way Sasuke and Naruto acted together. I also love the dreams they have. Very hot!
=)
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. you even managed to put sex in it an not rush them into having sex, i really like that. i have a quick question though is the dream that they are both having flashes of memeory from a past life that they had together. in their past life are they supposed to be naruto and sasuke konoha ninjas. i can't wait for the next update.
person mls
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!
person Tall Tree-san
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just love the dream sequences you have going there! Loved the chappie too ^-^!
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute story, I'm enjoying it so much.
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very funny!! I loved this chapter it was so cute and funny! Poor Naruto! Didn't get to eat his ramen-noodle-goodness!! Hoping for more! Love the story!
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The best part in this is not only do Naruto's friends get to laugh at his predicament, but all of Sasuke's friends choose to share in his humiliation too at letting him dance with a boy. >:)

This is the true joy that only occurs in real life. =^^= Keep up the great work!
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it, please update soon what to know what would happen.