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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm very happy to see a new chappie to this story as well! And congrads again for getting married :D!
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November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, i like your story, though i'm a bit bummed out neji is sort of ooc. but then again, you make up for it with gaara.
i'm the kind of reviewer who has to give some constructive criticism, so i'm hoping that's how you'll take it.
first off, you should get yourself a beta. you keep mixing up your/you're, their/they're etc.
second off, some parts doesn't really feel like you thought them through. the sasunaru-sex kind of bothered me. if they're both in denial of being gay and all that comes with that, how come sasuke goes in search for naruto's prostate as soon as he's got his fingers up naruto's ass? it might just be me being over anal about this, but i thought i'd let you know what i think.
that being said, i still love the plot and i hope you update soon.
i'm the kind of reviewer who has to give some constructive criticism, so i'm hoping that's how you'll take it.
first off, you should get yourself a beta. you keep mixing up your/you're, their/they're etc.
second off, some parts doesn't really feel like you thought them through. the sasunaru-sex kind of bothered me. if they're both in denial of being gay and all that comes with that, how come sasuke goes in search for naruto's prostate as soon as he's got his fingers up naruto's ass? it might just be me being over anal about this, but i thought i'd let you know what i think.
that being said, i still love the plot and i hope you update soon.
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November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much and I'm glad you updated. I was thinking about this story the other day and I was all "Man...I hope she'll update her stories one day." And you updated them and now I'm so happy. :]
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter! You have yourself a new rabid fan who also happens to be really good with grammer and wouldn't mind being your beta if you're still looking for one.
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June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
If I reveiw again will that make the next chapter come faster?!!! I should probably mention I'm a hyperactive blond that could give Naruto a run for his money^-^ I love the way Gaara was tricking Neji into getting Sasuke to do all that dumb stuff! It was Hilarious! I fear for Kakashi!...and by that I mean I fear he left this world and poor Iruka behind him!!!!! It can't be!
P.S. I still want to be your beta if you're interested!
P.S. I still want to be your beta if you're interested!
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Leaf cafe Chap.1
I completely enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to see what happens next!! I think this is the first story I have ever run across that had Sasuke playing basketball so I am really looking forward to see how he plays it cool and how much fun his friend Neji is going to have at the Uchiha's expense!!! Oh the joy of it all!!!
I completely enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to see what happens next!! I think this is the first story I have ever run across that had Sasuke playing basketball so I am really looking forward to see how he plays it cool and how much fun his friend Neji is going to have at the Uchiha's expense!!! Oh the joy of it all!!!
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 2 I am enjoying your story and looking forward to the process Sasuke will go through to understand his own feelings.....and have to chuckle over or not Naruto can survive the struggle Sasuke is going through!! LOL
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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 4
Oh the suspense....how is Kakashi? Where is he and what does he do for the Uchiha family?? Can we hope its legal? Like government kind of stuff?? We will worrie if its illegal cause then he could get into all sorts of issues that could make life difficult for them both. Oh and the game was ....YAY.....and its kind of fun to watch Sasuke step out of his comfort zone!!
Oh the suspense....how is Kakashi? Where is he and what does he do for the Uchiha family?? Can we hope its legal? Like government kind of stuff?? We will worrie if its illegal cause then he could get into all sorts of issues that could make life difficult for them both. Oh and the game was ....YAY.....and its kind of fun to watch Sasuke step out of his comfort zone!!
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May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awsome story, it was really funny :) hope you post more up
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May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMFG, you left it with a cliffhanger, damn you, I WANTED TO SEE WHAT HAPPENED WITH KAKASHI AND WHAT HAPPEND WHEN NARUTO AND SASUKE WAKES up>>>>>>>>>.......>>>>>>>>>,,,, Please update soon, that was mean.