rate_review Reviews

nice job keep up the good work.I can't wait for the sex scene.stop it!(shouting at inner pervert)

apologies are so rare like an endangered speices.i didnt really think sasuke was capable of remorse or guilt surprise surprise.hope you can update soon

I really like this story, but it is difficult to read. Not because of your writing, but you have a tendency to stick a person's thoughts or reactions with the other person talking.

Like this...
"Go to hell." Sasuke decided he was going to kill Naruto.

But really, it was Naruto who said it, but it sounds like Sasuke.
It should read.

"Like Hell." (A tag here could work but if in the flow you probably don't need it."
Sasuke decided he was going to kill Naruto.

I hope I didn't offend you with this. Thanks, can't wait for an update.
Slave

I love this, please continue.

OK, I just got thru the first third of the first chapter and had to toss in a review - great story so far, but what is with all the squealing? My god, the squealing!

wow, interesting start, and full of mysteries..like the way its begun and eagerly await a new chapter, thank you for the read and I hope to read a new chapter soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

OK, finished the story. I like what you did with the characters - Sasuke is a bastard - and the squealing makes me think I am bleeding from the ears (I have a very vivid imagination). Naruto is really cute, and I like how you portrayed Gaara. I am looking forward to hwat you do with the rest of the story!

I truly feel like this is going to be another fantastic story. I really can't wait, I haven't read something like else better and you have really build up some tension in the first chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm going to bookmarked this fanfic.