rate_review Reviews

Please don't seriously think of killing neji again. Not even with old age. Yay neji's awake! Now i can finally get some sleep too

*Glare* I would have boycot the rest of your storys now and in the futcher, like I boycot by not riewing in the last chap, if you has killed Neji. That was NOT cool, what you did. When you called yourself a bitch in the last chap for cutting off where you did, and than ran off for DAYS on END on your spring brick. *growl* I was thinking a lot harsher names for you at that time. You made me cry and than RAN. I was not a happy camper. *huff, puff* But....you have redeamed yourself by comeing back and faceing the music.

That was a very good chapter. You really out did yourself on it. You had me crying again only with 'Happy' tires. *relife shigh* I am SO glad you didn't kill Neji. Oh thank you God! I really didn't want to have to give up such a great auther story cause you want nuts and killed a leading chearter of your story. That is writers susiced, exspishley if you don't put warrning for it in the summery! But that dosn't matter cause you didn't and I am sooooo happy about that! XD Great Work! Update as soon as you can! Please? *begging and pleading, and hands and knees*

Yay, Neji lived!! Yay, Shika said THE words!! Yay, Ino's a bitch...wait, why did I say yay to that. ^^; When she said "I'm sorry", my heart started beating really fast and I was like NOOOOOO, but when she sait “You won’t be able to have sex for a little while”...well, is it wrong to want to slap, punch, kick, or maim a fictional character? I know she was just kidding, but still... Anyway, I loved the fluffy part when Shika said IT. ^_^ I can't wait for Neji to get better.

I enjoyed it!!! Yay Neji lived! Lol anyway, I saw a few typos in there, but not many. As for the rp thing, I'd love to, I use to rp every night for like 3 or 4 years straight, but now I'm always an on and off rper. I hope everything goes well for you and I'll check for another update soon, now I must be off to bed because I'm tired as hell! Good night and good luck with the rping!
Ja Matta,
Revine

Whoot! Cant wait to read more ^.^

I'm so addicted to this fic I dreamed of it last night! Love it! Please keep it up. :D

Yay!! He finally said the 3 little words...lol. is there goign to be more...or is this almost the end? anyways..keep up the good work, Im looking forward to ur next chapter!

Everyone celebrate! Neji lived! And Shikamaru finally said those three special words. ^_^ I seriously tried to think of a decent way to let Neji die, but I couldn't. I just couldn't kill him. :P All of you be happy about that.

o.O ... You were going to seriously kill Neji?!!!! THANK YOU FOR NOT KILLING HIM OFF!!

-Damp *Shika happy too.*

Hee. XD Yes, I am indeed an angst lover. And you're very good at drawing out tension in a scene. *o* I'm too impatient to write like that, although I love to read it. XD;;;

One thing-- Ino's joke about the not being able to have sex thing. It was really funny here, knowing it's fiction, but I think it'd have been really horribly out of place in real life. ^_^; Just hearing the first "I'm sorry" and all that building up before the reassurance would be enough to make somebody break down. XD I know if a doctor came out of the emergency room for my best friend and was acting all serious, and then said, "I'm sorry," I'd fall apart on the spot. ^_^; Even given time, the gut reaction would be "OH MY GOD!" So just a note on realism. XD Like, if I were Shikamaru, even after finding out Neji was fine, I'd be like, "Ino, thank you for saving his life, but I'm going to fucking kill you now for putting me through that!" ^^;;;

But anyway. Very nice.

YAY! Neji's alive! YAY! Shikamaru said 'I love you'! YAY! And they lived happily ever after, albeit with Neji sporting a new scar? ^_____^ ♥

omg! i hope neji survives. i'll cry if he doesn't. i love this story. i want you to keep writing it forever!:D