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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person nawatia
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
such a heartbreaking chapter! I shed tears, but I Believe in happy endings too!!!
schedule March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I couldn't stop grinning. Ohhh, angst makes me SO giddy! The heartache, the heartbreak~~~ ♥

I LOVE the comment on believing, though-- that if you have to make yourself believe, then that means you aren't 100% certain to begin with. That's awesome. :D I generally call that faith rather than belief, but I can see the distinction. ^_^ Niftykeen. Awww, such a sad Shikamaru! *cuddles*
person luxeflex
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is one nasty bitch of a cliffhanger xD
but great update anyway! poor neji ;_; and gaara to the rescue!
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you said you wasn't going to update for a few days, but COME ON! You can't leve us hanging like this. Thats the worres cliff hanger yet! Update. Please?! Great work of the chapter. You have me all antesy about whats going to happen. Great Job! ^___^
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's bad! (not the story, what happened to Neji) Now I've gotta read more! Oh, and Shikamaru's gonna be pissed!
person Revine
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow....you are so mean, lol. Anyway it was another good chapter and well I love/hate angst... more love than hate though. Anyway I thought it was good. Have a good Spring Break and I'll read the new chapter when you post it, have a great few days! =D
Ja Ne,
Revine
person HannaFO
schedule March 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! That was just plain mean!!
You better have him survive or i'll beat ya :D
Please update as fast as you can!!!
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why are you apologizing?! Spend your spring break however you'd like or need to. :D I'm going to be spending mine working. >_>

I was so relieved when there was the report of another group outside of Konoha. XD I'd been worrying that that was all-- Neji easily saves the day, the end. XD YAY! Now there can be pain and suffering that's smoothed over by loving. ♥♥♥ Nice, very nice.

... What were they doing in the Nara forest, though?!
person lonelydove
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* NO! i hope he lives >.< lol
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No!!! How could you just end it like that? Normally, I'm just fine with cliffhangers, but COME ON! Even that was a bit much. lol j/k Although, it does really make me want to read the next chapter. ^_^ Take your time doing what you need to do, I'll still be here when you update.