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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person lonelydove
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow XD lol loved it hehehehe
person HannaFO
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YUMMY!!! so so so sooooo hot. I like the fact that Neji was the agressor for once XD Very nice indeed ! :D
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please say you are going to do a "meanwhile at Sasuke and Naruto's" segment. That would be so funny and cute.
person Raholea
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh.. my.. gosh...
That was hot
*cheers for more lemon*
*passes out from blood loss*
person MiZuNa
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha! Oh yes, Neji is sooo~ much trouble XD XD XD ! Poor Shikamaru... I could nearly (XD) feel bad for him... ;P
Thank God for smut *does happy dance* !!! Again; Great Chapter ^___^ !
person Anna
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i totally agree on that being one the the best orals you've written! i'm really happy that Neji finally got to give Shikamaru something cos they both deserve it :) Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I wonder what Sasuke is up to? I have a guess, but of course I'm not sure. I, myself, thought the chapters were all well written and great as ever. Good job! (Offers cookie)lol!
person nawatia
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a pretty good BJ. (so many pervy thoughts going thru my mind - sigh!) Does Shikamaru have any "issues" with his avoidance of receiving pleasure? Does he have some lack self worth, value himself less than others? If so, will they work on that as a couple? Neji could feel that he is becoming just an object of desire, instead of a partner/mate. Physical pleasure is a gift that a couple gives to each other, not just in one direction. Perhaps Neji could talk to Shikamaru and discuss how much Shikamaru likes to give Neji pleasure. Doesn't Shikamaru want Neji to have the same wonderful experience?

Ok, that was just my long winded way of saying "what is good for one, is good for the other"
person amith
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neji isn't the only one sighing happily...I was during the whole chapter! Get update! How was your B-day?
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great work. For some reasion I did not see that smut comeing...I am fanted in shock! A good shock, but a shock never less. Great smut seen, I love it! But I am curesis as to why Shika is being to restent to Neji giveing hime pleasher back...I want to know what is up with that. Please update as soon as you can! GREAT Work! ^___^