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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person charmpit
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG insanely hot ShikaNeji bondage sex! I was on the edge of my seat--I think I forgot to breathe! That was SO FREAKING HOT! Shikamaru is a freaking machine!

Sasuke is a troublemaker, isn't he? Shikamaru should do something downright dastardly to get him back for that.
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was hot! I love it when the ukes take control for once. poor Shikamaru all tied up and helpless. But you know he loved it. Who wouldn't? i wonder if Naruto is going to be made at Sasuke for drugging him. Afterall that was not a very nice thing to do. update soon. You know I want to read more. Ja ne!
person ydjessy
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Like always loved it, keep up the good work.
person Luma
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Swan. -sniggers- Ha I could totally see Neji being Swan. It does fit him. -nods-
Well if that's so, then happy birthday. =o You're forgiven.
Whoosh. Looking forward to the next update.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so sweet! I enjoy every update.
Happy Birthday!
person HannaFO
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ANBU eh? Well that's cool !! Thanks for a great update, and Happy birthday!!! *hiphip hurray*
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Naruto's new job, yay for Shika's and Neji's new jobs, and just yay in general. lol I think Swan fits Neji perfectly. Happy Birthday...20 huh? Makes me feel old at 24. XD j/k
person mihoshi
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I apologize for not commenting for the last few chapters. One would have thought that at least Chouji would have thought about buying food. I had to laugh at the thought of them getting caught having sex on a mission then I had to wipe the drool off my face as I continued to think about it. Keep up the great work. I cant wait to read more.
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're forgiven. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!

Sweet...good news for Naru! :-)
person WhenYouToldMeYouLovedMe
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it and you are very right about the swans. I have actually been attacted by those bastards -_- Don't go chasing baby swans. The parents get really mad o.o

Happy 20th Birthday!