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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not awkward at all ^_^ You did great as always and I loved the scene in the bath, especially the Shika-thing. So cute! I have to admit that I like to call Shikamaru like that ^^ Oohhh, shopping...what will happen? Endless teasing from their friends? Neji on a shopping-spree? Shikamaru buying more lube? Hmmmm, the possibilties...
person MiZuNa
schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! There he was again; A blushing Neji! ^____^
Wohooo! You made my day! ;P
Can't wait for more...
person Revine
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I just had the longest weekend of my life. I was reading your story all Thursday night and well into Friday morning, but before I could finish it I had to leave on a college trip...I was gone the whole weekend wondering what the hell would happen next...literally as soon as I got home I got on here and to my surprise, you'd updated twice while I was gone. I was so effing happy! Anyway I finally caught up and now I'm happy! ^.^ I really enjoy your story and I hope you update soon!!!
Ja,
Revine
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a wedding night! Very nice chapter! Way cool. I want to know what's up though (besides the two of them, of course)...something is going on for sure...Shikamaru knowing little things...the whole thing...Can't wait to read more!
person Annie
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoo! that certainly warmed me up!!! I can barely feel the cold over here!!
person gaara89
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute, can't wait for the next one!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, and sweet chapter. I love it. Ya the ending of it seemed a little abuted, but nothing to bad. I still liked it, a lote. Good Work!I hope you can update soon, I am hoping for tomorrow, but not exspating it. I don't want you to rush to much, that way you wont boun out as quickly. LOL So ya, great work. UPdate soon! ^___^
person amith
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow you really got me hooked on this story! I can't go a day without checking at least 5 times to see if you updated! It's like a drug to me!!!!
Anyway nice chapter I really liked you ended it too!
person Luma
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's right. You better run. Fear the plastic thing!
Sex in the tub? Do eet~! You know you want to.
Ha ha. xD Make 'em starve yes? Yay~!
Psh this chapter was amusing. x3
Looking forward to the next update.
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*ding dong* Aini-chan: hmm I wonder what Arry-chan got me this time." *opens a square box to find a beautiful couture dress for your next emmy award appearance* inside there was a note * For the greatest hard-working writer who brings fantasy alive a dress for the future, to Aini-chan from Arry-chan.


Hehe yay Your back! lol not that it was that long haha. Well this bundle of cuteness wrapped up in this chappie was too adorable. Neji being awesome calling Shikamaru Shika which means deer lol so it's kinda girly lol but fits him perfectly wonder whatcha going to make Neji's name be hmmm I loved the part when he called Shika his Husband twas sooo happy it was just so right ^_____^ I am wondering when they'll say those wonderful three special words to each other though. And aren't you miss interior designer great design hon I wood love to live in that house hehe well Update when you can hopefully soon *_*

Loves Arry