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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person LadyWolf
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aini, you did good!! No, you did great! I loved the way that Neji wanted to 'give' to Shika in spite of the pain he was in....that was just so darn sweet!

I can't wait to read the next chapter. You are so awesome for posting everyday! **gives you another neji and shika plushie***

I'm happy that you are continuing this fic!!!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And the award for the sexiest and yet still loving yaoi scene goes to...*drum roll*... Aini-chan for The Way Things Are nominated by Arry-chan

That was soo Good oh my god phew mand that was ridiculously HOTT!!!! great great great lemon and you did it sooo right! I love Neji being a screamer that so freaking right when you think about it he's normallly quiet and reserved so in turn he should be an animal in the sac and loud hehe just fantastical Two rounds on the first night! That's pretty damn impressive and no stops in-between really wow Aini I wonder what esle your mind going to come up for us. I'm very happy this isn't the end this story is too great to end just yet but I have to admit I have no clue whats next kinda kool well I'll be waiting for your next installment soon. Hope you have a awesome time at you activity tomorrow!

Loves Arry
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, now they're all wedded and bedded! YAY! Now Shikamaru gets to get off properly, too. ^____^

Are you still shooting for 25 chapters?? I wonder what the last three will be... *_*

I'm SO glad that you didn't just have Neji be all, "Oooh, feels good" within seconds of his first penetration. It drives me absolutely BONKERS when fics do that. ~_~;;; Thank youuuu. ♥

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person extawe
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Add in newspaper: Strange death reporterd of a woman bleeding to death from nosebleed infront of her computer.*
Totally hot and I love you!!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Phew...*fans herself*..and that was the best morning smut yet! Damn, that was hot. I can sooo imagine it happening between them like this...which is NOT a good thing if you have to attend a family meeting in a couple of minutes. But I couldn't wait to read about the big night so it's my own damn fault ^_^' I hope you plan on still continuing for a few more chapters!!!
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Wow...that was definantly worth the wait. *reaches for the tissues that were so generously handed out* I applaude, no, give you a standing ovation for this. XD That is about all I can say about it...I'm pretty much speechless. lol
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wasnt even aware that u had updated!! >< lol
i loved it, the wedding was sweet and I loved the
wedding night XD hehehe i love this story ^_^
person Lavinia
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
a week without my computer, and when I get it back, what do I find? A lots and lots of updates! Gosh girl I love you!

This story has turned out brilliant. You make their interacting seem very real. And the smut is hot :P

Please update soon! I wanna hear about their morning after x)
person yaoi_loving_kisser23
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was such an amazing story. I loved it. I cried like 20 times. I enjoyed it alot and can't wait to see what else you put up. I hope you continue.
person coolmiko
schedule March 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story please update soon