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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person tovah
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It doesn't matter where in a chapter the smut is, all that matters is that it is there and written well. Love this story can't wait for the wedding night.
person HannaFO
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omg. omg. omg!! Wedding bells!! *squiel* that means hot wedding sex right? oh please say that it is so!!!
As always your updates leave me breathless and flushed... Arigato :D
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Wedding... ^.^ WOOT! Hehehe.... ^.^
person qwerty
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh, your comment at the end made me laugh. Poor Neji, I sensed a small bit of sadness when he said "Because I'm not of the main branch".
Good chapter.
update
person gaara89
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the wedding!!! Update soon!
person nawatia
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Smuttastic sweetness!
person drivven
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sweet! K, my teeth hurt now. LOL I really really love this. I can't get enough. If you dropped this now, I really would cry. *hugs* Thanks hon. Keep going you don't wanna see a grown woman cry, it's not a pretty thing.
person ydjessy
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the wedding I'm really looking forward to reading it.
Update as fast as you can please.
person Anon
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! its wedding time..cant wait to see what happens ^_^
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The wedding's next? Really?? YAY! ♥

I love the idea of Shikamaru taking Neji far out into the forest just to let him scream. XD C'est trés mignon~ And YAY, Neji's starting to do stuff back to Shikamaru! ♥♥♥ Extra joy! Even if Shikamaru's happy as is, that was just SO not fair. Good Neji, goooood Neji. :3