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Once again thank you for the tissues. They came in handy. I hear the faint sound of wedding bells. But now I have to go to the blood bank because I'm pretty sure that I'm going to need some due to the amount of blood I've lost over the past few days. Not that I'm complaining. I rather like reading all the smutty goodness. I don't care how much blood I lose. Update soon K. Ja ne!

Mah!! I like this fanfiction!
The way its written is great.
Not to mention the smut =^.^= *purrs* its so cute!
So yeh hope you keep writeing chapters and all that jazz
Though I have to ask cause I like the way you wrote this one...
Would u ever do a KankuroXKiba fanfic o.O?
I'd love u forever for it really reallly really lol
Well w/e with that good writeing from one fanfic writer to the next heh *waves*

-snickers- I would love to see it as a side-fic. Great for entertainment purposes when you need a laugh.
The Tick... wow. I haven't seen that in forever. xD You're not a retard for liking it. =o You're a retard for being reminded of an episode by me going 'mmm brains'.
Mm. I enjoyed it very much. x3 Not the Sakura hitting Neji part though. That was just mean. xD
Woosh!
Looking forward to the next update!

poor neji! he got punched i don't like sakura much. never have. loved the way shikamaru took care of neji. hehe

Hello there.

So, honestly, I don't review fanfics that often, because for one, I'm picky and two, I'm a lazy little bitch. however, after spending a couple of hours this morning reading the entirety of this fic, and now this newest chapter, I felt that I owed you a review. I am a very big fan of Neji and Shikamaru as a couple and just as characters in general and I think that you've pretty much kept them as IC as the plot of this ficlet will allow. It's a very enjoyable read and one that has kept me interested. I love the slow build up, because so many authors just choose to rush things and for me personally that ruins the magic of the fic (And I can say 'magic' because I openly admit that I'm corny.) It seems that your writing has progressed in quality along with the story, not that it was bad at all to begin with. You are great writer and the fact that I actually care about what is going on in the story is show of that. There are a few typos, but with the quality of this fic they are simply overlooked. Anyways, the point is, I really love this story and can't wait to read more of it. Update when you can, because it's worth the wait.

TillThatTime

P.S. Ha! Look oral, isn't it lovely?... Sounds like you're talking about living room decorations.

I'm loveing it! Keep them comeing! .... I think I just made a pune... O.O? LOL anyways, damn Sakura I know your pissted, but shit, tack a mint to think before you acted...Neji's not 'realy' the one keep the seacret from you, if was Naruto and sauske. *Shick head at Sukura* I hope the bursing on Nejis face is gone by his wedding day, I mean I don't think he will be very happy if he has to waire make-up just to cover it up...But that would be funny, seeing Hinata and sister trying to keep Neji still while they dall him up. LOL Thinking abut it now I think you should use it. It would just be halareis. ROTF Well eather way, its your story and I can't wait for the next chappter. Great work! ^___^

~Personle Note~
Tell us when you have the side story of N/S, comeing out up, ok? I am really intreasted in reading it. Thanks! ^___^

Curse you, Sakura, for punching my Neji like that!

Oh well, at least it gave Shikamaru an excuse for more smut. Not that he needs an excuse but it's always nice to have one.

You're story is fantastic! I have to admit you are spoiling your readers by updating so often and such good chapters! I love the couple Shikamaru and Neji. The way you describe them, they fit perfectly! Also, your lemons are well written! So far I really love it! I often check to see if you updated. Keep up the good work! I'm greatly enjoying reading your fic!

Once again, Sakura draws the short straw. Sucks to be her!

I can't believe she decked Neji. She's lucky he didn't zap her until she couldn't move anymore--were he of the mind she never would have had a chance to dodge it.

Of course I'm sure if Neji had known Shikamaru was going to do THAT to him afterward, Neji would have asked Sakura to deck him TWICE.

Okay, enough titillation! On to the hyper-hot Nara Shadow Possession sex!!!!!

I thought when Sakura said 'urgent' she meant something was wrong/happened to someone important in the story physically..but I was wrong!! haha!!

Keep it up I love you~~

~Jien