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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person LadyWolf
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The coming out of Naruto and Sasuke was big enough....This fic IS about Neji and Shikamaru RIGHT???? I love the way Shika does so much to pleasure Neji. Dang...!! Maybe I'm slow but what the hell are these steps!!???

NO don't tell me, if Shika is doing this then it MUST be good!!!

Love this fic can't wait to read the next chappie!!!!
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I haven't been back in a while and the last chapter I had read was, like, 8 or something! Man you can write! I am really loving this one. I like the steps! Shikamaru really knows how to play it! Neji is way more relaxed now, too. Awesome on that point. I'm glad that Naruto and Sasuke told Sakura and stuff. I liked Tsunade's 'mission' to the onsen. Mission my Heineken! Ha, Ha! Anywho...just wanted to let you know that I still love this fic and can't wait to read more. I can't wait to read more of Shikamaru's 'steps' (wink, wink). Oh, and I'm also curious about Shikaku's little 'venture' that Yoshino mentioned. Do we get any more about that? I will totally check back for more (*Lith* drools all over laptop and keys no longer function. *Hypno-Lith* demands more!!!!) Can you say 'addiction'? lol
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ShikaNeji:
Not sex? Depends on your definition of sex. ^_~ But mmm, smexy~ ♥
... I love how shy little virgin Neji's turned into quite the gutterhead. XD Dahahahaha!

SasuNaru:
I adore that Sasuke pounced before Neji was even fully goe from the hot spring. XD So adorably impatient! And YAY~! They'll finally be coming out! Yaaaaay! ♥

Lovely and precious as always, m'dear~
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, smutness all the way! What a way to start the morning for me. Hmmm *purrs* Shika and Neji in an onsen...*grinning like a pervert while dreaming about naked shinobis* Can't wait for step six...I know I would be tearing my hair out in frustration if you wouldn't update every day, so thank you sooo much for that!
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, first, I'm sick...so I ALMOST decided not to get on here tonight. I'm SOOOOOO glad I did though. I think I have the numbers figured out...10 will be the wedding night, 9 will maybe be fingering, 8 maybe oral of some kind. Am I right? It's just a guess, and I'm probably wrong again, but like I said before...Guessing is fun. XD
person drivven
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the smut! *hugs Shika* He's so sweet and gallant. haha Neji has a night in shining....hmmm. Well, you get the point. I really do love this fic. It's fast becoming my fave and these two aren't even my fave pairing....*whispers* is actually ShikaNaru... Anyway, good work, more please.
person drivven
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ugh! should have been knight in shining... Its too early Sorry
person Jien
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aside from 'I'm looking forward to read this fic at the end of everyday' I'm not really sure I have much more to say except update soon!!

~Jien
person hatsumomo
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for smut! i love the way this story is progrressing. it's prefect.
person MiZuNa
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Guuu~h... *melts*
NAKED!Shika, NAKED!Shika, NAKED!Shika...!!! Wuah, even NAKED!Shika!InanOnsen!!! No-no-no... Wait...

NAKED!Shika!InanOnsen!GropingNeji!ThendoingSMUTthingswithaWET!Neji ! ! ! !

I'm dying... too smexy... X____x°


P/S: Can't wait for the "Sasu/Naru-Coming out of the year" XD !!!