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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person ChibiBerry
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow..sakura sure is scary..poor neji..lol. i especially love it when u shikamaru glares, i thought he was too lazy do do things like that. please continue updating, im looking forward to your next chapter. 8D
person Twiggies
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww. xD I love this story!
I like the kissing. :D The fluffyness is adorable.
Meh, I love the way you write Shikamaru and Neji.
Somehow they are very different.. but still (in some way) in character. xD
Mm.. I hope they are getting married soon enough. I can't wait to read about their honeymoon!. xDD
More like I can't wait their wedding night(s). Hehe. ;D

Update soon, I can't wait!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*snigger* Well, Shika definitely deserved the punch in the gut. Meanie ^_^ So that's what was crawling up Yoshino's butt. Nevertheless...I can't stand that woman. Sweet smile or not, she is very unfair. I hope she comes around and soon. As for what's coming next...hmmm *thinks hard*...I don't care ^_^ I'd rather wait for you to write the next step. You do it so well ^_~
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew, it got pretty warm there for a second. XD Yay for his first hickey! Also, at least we all know why Yoshino acts like she does...I wonder who the mystery man was. I wanna read more!
person Anon
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww...i love it, its so cute hehehe cant wait to see
what happens next ^_^
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^.^ I normally don't review Naruto fics, (I still with the potter sites) But since I reviewed before, I'll review again. See you defeated the evil Post-eating Demons.. Go you!

and Great story, BTW.. The hickey and hit at the end was priceless...

See ya next chapter!

~Professor
person MiZuNa
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaay for Nejis first hickey! ^___^ I'm so proud of him *sheds fake tears into a tissue* !
And yaaaay for fluff... oh so much fluff ^^ ! I'm so happy. There can't be enough fluff XD !

Oooh and Shikaku had something with a man... Hmm... Inos Dad? Chojis Dad?

Haha, yeah Shikamaru could seduce whole Konoha... if he wasn't so damn lazy lol ! Oh, and before I forget... *hands Aini a "I need more Shika/Neji-smexyness!" banner* *grin*
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Happy Review Box with goodies inside for Aini-chan from Arry-chan

YATA!!! The chappie is up and oh la la was that hot and sexy yummy goodness lol. I loved it but Question with them kissing so steamyily(lol made up the word just now) how is it then that they don't get aroused or do they? But Shikamaru and Neji ignore it cos I don't know anyone who doesn't get hot and bothered during a sexy hot make-out session. Oh and we now know why Yoshino is how she is and I most say I don't blame her much cos I'd feel pretty shitty if my husband left me for ANYBODY let alone another male thats fucked up! I say she should cheat on Shika's dad with a Woman in their shared bed and have him walk in on it, so she can be at ease with the situation and give back some revenge who cares if it was like 20 years ago, woman never forget so she should so cheat on him lol I had the most hilarious image on how she could do it but it was naughty don't think you'd wanna know lol. Well update soon hon I Love my TWTA fixes I'm a junkie hehehe hope you like your box of review thoughts.

Loves Arry
person charmpit
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I can just imagine the two of them writhing around nude together in the dark! Shika make Neji squeal! So SEXY!

More please!
person tovah
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Lime-aide, It was very refreshing!