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"gods... if sex feels better than this, I’m not so sure I can wait till the wedding night."
oh my, yes. i remember those thoughts!!! lol. it's perfect!!!! all the little steps and yet nothing that would really break *all* the barriers- yet. can negi survive his wedding night? or will he pounce his poor fiance before then?? lol. i can't wait to find out!!!!!

-kicks her computer-

That would be awesome. xD Yoshino comes in, stares for all of two seconds before she starts screeching at them at the top of her lungs. Disappears into the kitchen and starts hurling random items at Shikamaru.

Yay smut~! About time to. Must see more.... or I eat your brain... mmm. bra~ins.
Just kidding. Can't wait for the next update. x3

Yay smut!

Can't wait for the wedding night!

Liked it? I loved it! *Pinches bleeding nose* These smut scenes are some of the hottest I have ever read> Looooove it! *Grabs a pretty box of brownies* Here you go! Now update! LOL

HOt hot hot! NICE!!! Ok, the chappy with the come-out needs to be nice and long! lol...I can't wait!

...wow...*blink, blink* I think that was jsut as good as a lemon if not better. XD I guess your just going to have to come out with a better Leomon to bet out, just that little smut. Good Luck on that....LOL I can't wait to see what you come out with. If that just your smut for this story, I am not sure I will serive the lemon. LOL All well there are worres things to die by, and dieing from too much blood lose do to Smut is one on the best was to go, if you ask me. XD

One week tell Naruto and Sasuke comes out...I am like Shika, I hope they don't have to much trubble after comeing out. Please let Sakura tack the news well...I mean come on, Naruto and Sasuke have had enought problems as it is in the past, the lest that could happen is that she tack the news greasly right? *hopefule smile*

Great work on the chapter, and alsome working on the smut, but with that, I exspate you to go all out on the lemon to bet the smut. LOL Please update as soon as you can! GREAT JOB! ^___^

Hell, I'll take smut over nothing anyday.

-Damp *WEEEE THE MOMENT IS COMING!!!*

Lol! Naruto and Sasuke totally had sex in the hot spring didn't they! Dude, Kudos to Neji! I wouldn't be able resist that for so long.

Oh god, that was adorable! u arite such good smut! please update soon, i cant wait to read what happens next. 8D

AW! Nice chapter. Can't wait to see Sasuke and Naruto come out! How many more steps are there to Shika's plan? Grr...
good chapter
update