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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person lonelydove
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Who cares it was still awesome XD
they're so cute
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tissue! Tissue! I need a tissue! Thank you for the nosebleed. Thank you very much. I can't wait until the wedding night. I also want to know how Sakura acts when Naruto and Sasuke come out. It's going to be funny. Or at least I hope you make it funny. I really hate her.
person ydjessy
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can assure you that I liked it, we're getting somewhere. And I'm happy that Naruto and Sasuke are finally planning on coming out. Hope to see the next update soon!
person LadyWolf
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it may not be smex, but who cares!!! It was hot!!! I just love Shika and Neji!! If this keeps up and I read more great fics about these two, they might over take the number 1 spot!!!!!
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The besttest most Amazingest prettiest decorated present with the animated version The Way Things Are! to Aini-chan from Arry-chan

KYAAA!!!^_______^ Oh my god that was the sexiest double jackoff/make-out smut in the entire world that made me super tingly inside I am speechless that was sooo freakin great makes me wonder if I'll explode right along with Neji and Shika on their wedding night. Kami woman your're great at writing smut, your lemons must be out of this world. *blushes* probably too much info but oh well you must know how great you are hehehe.

"But he still couldn’t help having delicious thoughts about the Nara when he would wake up and have to relieve himself of his morning erections."

Brillant I wish we could have seen it lol *nosebleeds*

well can't wait for the next update hon give me what I call 'Ficgasms' galore lol
update soon hehe

Loves Arry
person SGOU
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful capter. I love that they are off on a vacation, and I love that they are getting even closer. I am always a fan of PDA, especially elicit PDA- so I absolutely adored the part where Shika was getting Neji excited in the springs. :D Want more, more, more! Can't wait to hear about the coming out of NaruSasu either.
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story obsessively. I just got an account recently, so now I'm finally able to review!
Very good story (but I do think that Neji is a bit out of character).
I've enjoyed the whole story so far.
Shino/Hinata is one of my favorite pairings, by the way.
Neji and Shikamaru's physical relationship was progressing so slowly, and it just seemed to take a giant jump in this chapter...getting a little impatient? lol
person HannaFO
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn now the image of a soking wet Neji won't leave my head XD Uber Smexy!!!
person digiditz
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So there was no actual penetration, who cares? Smut is smut is smut.

I think you're doing a fantastic job by the way and have gotten me completely hooked on the pairing. You've inspired me; I may even write my own someday.
person hatsumomo
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay for neji getting a hickey! i love this story. i look forward to reading the update everyday!