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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I love how their physical relationship is progressing. It seems more realistic than the usual "wham-bam-thank-you-ma'ams". Buuut, I have to admit I can't wait for the "first time"...*imagines and drools*. I especially like the comparison of Neji's eyes to the clouds. Awww, this is such a cute fic. Can't wait for your next update!
person digiditz
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very cruel indeed. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cruel?!? That was not only cruel, it was EVIL!!! You, my dear, are evil, evil, evil, evil...you get what I mean. Argh, I can't believe you left us hanging there...*grmbl* Ohhh, what is Shika planning to do with his helpless, innocent, frozen victim...*goes away, wondering on all the hot, sexy stuff they could do*
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man oh man oh man!!!! HOW could you just leave off right there? Now I HAVE to read the next chapter. lol BTW, on a side note, I LOVE how you snuck "the cat wearing a bow" into this chapter. XD Just how many times is that cat going to escape...poor Hanabi. rofl
person drivven
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Where the heck is that bat?!! I know I got it back from fairy. When I find it, this cliffie is toast! :p Brat! Now I have to go to work all worked up and I can't hit things there! ;p Good chappy!
person hatsumomo
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! please write it faster!!!! i'm really impatient and want to know what happens!
person Rishinti
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I must say that I had not thought of Neji and Shikamaru as a couple. After reading this story I can understand why people like it so much. It is well written and developed. I don't really see Neji submitting to any one, but you are doing a lovely job of changing my opinion of this too. I look forward to reading more.
person pen_name
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I missed a chapter! XDDD Damn, I really hate it when my job binds me like this. Can't seem to find enough time to read fanfics much less write them (and I really do try T_T). Anyway... You're being a tease! Again! Aaagh! But then again, that's what makes this story so exciting ^_^ Kudos for you, and let see how Neji responds to necking XDDD (at least, after he froze?)
person luxeflex
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a cruel cliffhanger xD
great chapter though :) especially shikamaru having to think about his moves xD
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well well Shika is getting closer to the goal isn't he ? but I wonder if Neji will let him
I hope you will mention how the narusasu romance will progres at last in passing it would be interesting to see how everyone would react to it
update soon ^^