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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person HannaFO
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What?? Where is the rest!?? *growl* I guess i shouldn't have said that cliffy queen thing XD
person Timberfox
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another sweet chapter. I'm really curious as to what Shikamaru wants - besides Neji's body. I liked the friendly family scene although I'm still wondering how/why Hinata and Shino ended up back in town. I'm guessing Neji's going to freeze up/freak out over the necking but I'll just wait and see.
person charmpit
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That Shika-kun's a card...he's making out with Neji-kun while a handful of Neji's closest family members are within earshot. Gotta love him!

If I were Neji I wouldn't be asking Shikamaru what he was doing I'd be helping him get me out of that yukata thing. Knowing Neji, though, he's going to get all indignant. Again.
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sfaskfjskdalfk Gahhh, so cute! I love how Shikamaru figured out Neji wasn't trying his best, but still played it out like he was. XD That's so sweet~ and eee! Squeal. What's the #1 thing he most wants? All-out smex? It seems like he's enjoying going step-by-step too much for that... wai! Wai! Does Neji get to have his first hickey soon? =3

Yay for Shino apologizing, too, btw. ^^v Even if we didn't actually get to see it. XD ♥
person Anaheyla
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh.

It's called necking.

Why must you torture us so!?!?
person qwerty
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You are cruel to leave it at that! But you are nice for updating!
I really love this story. *squee!*
update
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, Yes you are! *pout* and it was just getting good too. *pout more* But I think, that maybe Shika is well, maybe trying to get Neji more conturble with physicle affection, and maybe make it easer for Neji in the end, when they do finlly do have sex (make-love, or it could be to get Neji to have sex wtih him sooner, or it just mite be to maybe help show Neji how much he loves him, you know, to tell him he loves him, with out saying it, or mayby help get Neji to understand his feeling better. Is any of that right? ^___^;

Well, Great chapter! I can't wait for the next update! Please make it soon please...maybe like agian today? *hopefule smile* ^___^
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review package for a Miss Aini-chan from Arry-chan

Amazingness I love the semi-intense Shogi game would love to read when they're both going all out. Necking!!! hehe too cute yes the neck can lead to many things indeed since that's so many ppl's spot hahaha poor Neji won't know what hit him. Gaara-kun got pissy about being caught lol that was adorable! Question why do you have Hinata still stuttering? she only does that around Naruto or if it's a embracing topic but hey if thats how you want her its all good lol I'm a Hinata fan so I was like heyyy when I read it lol but it's fine it's your story after all hehe update soon love which I really don't have to say since you update everyday but it's the principle I suppose lol Wonder what's Shika's second wish? Great job hon

Loves Arry
person ydjessy
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes, your cruel for stopping there, but I'm pretty sure it won't go that far, at least not without Neji's consent. Keep it up. I'll try and catch the next update!
person Word_Slave
schedule March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More what more what for gods sake!!! let me know and I'll give you more... just to keep you writing.
Slave