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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person Telpei
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It's so sweet and cute. I'm so happy that Shikamaru ended up picking Neji... and that Hinata will get to stay with Shino. Thank goodness everything is working out! I love it when Neji gets all embarrassed... he's just too cute! ^_^

My guess for the next chapters...Neji learning how a couple interacts as a couple!! ^_^ So...do I get some cake, or am I totally off the mark?? :P

Great story!! I'm loving the fast updates. I look forward to the next chapter!! ^_^
person HannaFO
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn i was getting so in on this story i didn't even notice that there where no more chapters :( please update again soon!! *pleading puppy dog eyes*
person j.s
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love da story...the pairing is really interesting and it works.

the theme...hmmm.....'sex' , is that too blunt? lol

update soon
person pen_name
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Neji in red kimono... *drools*

Ahem. Anyway.

This chapter is so much fun. Shikamaru's going to suffer the full length of Gai's speech for the first time XD Hmm... things in the chapters going up to the wedding? I don't know... the marriage arrangement of Hinata and Shino maybe? Something happens that makes Yoshino like Neji? Awh, I have no idea. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. I have every confidence that they'll be great though, since you're the one writing them ^_^
person Twiggies
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapters!
Poor Naruto and Sasuke.. Well, I hope that they are coming out of their closet too, someday. xD

And the ShikaNeji cuteness was great.
Kissing.. Now with tongues, too. YAY ! xD
And I love Neji in red. :D I enjoy his red face too. xD

I hope you keep writing!
I'm loving the ShikaNeji fluffyness. :D
person Word_Slave
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yeahhhhhh!!!! another update!! Thanks!
Slave
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sway* I'm in a happy daze. Happy, happy, happy, I think, I kinda of feel like I'm high. LOL I am loveing how your are doing this story. *happy sigh* I am going to go and flot off over here, and wait dreamly for the next great, hot, spicey, passashent chapter. Great Job! XD
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this story on monday..and you've already updated..like 5 times or so by friday! Im so happy! Neji is just too adorable..blushing..so cute! Anyways..must read more..im only chap.9, that is just wrong..must read more more..muahahha. okay ignore me, im just hyper.
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was..um..unpredictable, i did not see that coming! Hinata came back, i cant believe, and ow neji is crying..thats just so sad. You sure are good at keeping people addicted to ur stories..amazing..lol. okayonto chapter 11? 12? okay wtv..ur probably going to get liek5 more reviews from me..i hope that deosnt bothers u..lol
person ElfenDream
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol! battle of the semes.. haha! that one got me. a sweet endearing chappie yes.. I like the build up. mhnm! they are soooo cute together..