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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
heh Sakura is always made out to be an annoying chit when there is some narusasu in the story
quite nice chapter and the progress between shika and neji is great- not too much too soon but I hope they will make it at least to the second base before the wedding night
update soon ^^
person charmpit
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! Thirteen "teaser" chapters. When do they get busy?! I want Neji-kun so worn out by his Shika-kun that he loses the power to stand up straight and form complete sentences. When does this happen praytell? I'm dying here!!!!
person SGOU
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Theme for the following chapters? Hmmm. How about "Shika viligently working towards breaking Neji in" Or "Shika taking every chance he can find to molest Neji" Or "Shika and Neji getting to know each other even better"
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I was far to warped into the story and emotions and THOSE KISSES to actually catch on to the theme sadly no cake for me. Oh wells I thoroughly enjoyed this chappie the cute chaste kisses that I now see as chaste kisses are too cute can't wait for more and promised lemon on the wedding night hehehe YAY! Loved the Red kimono Neji was wearing freakin awesome his lavender eyes and plae skin with Crimson Red silk absolutely without a doubt a brillant touch. Update soon please with vanilla Ice cream and Blood orange juice on top hehe (try it tastes amazing!^__^) hehehe Can't wait for more!

Loves Arry
person SGOU
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another two great chapters. I loved getting to read things from Shika's point of view. And I loved how Shika informed Neji of thier engagement. He he. Thank you for the kisses- and the really really sweet scene. I loved it.
person Luma
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No hiding place is good enough when comes to me who's doing the searching. One way or another you WOULD be found. It's inevitable really. Can't escape me.
But now I don't have to kill you. So I guess for now you're off the hook. Aren't you happy?
Now then. I shall sit here and stare at you while I wait for the next update.
person Moya
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shakes fist ot AFF for cutting half of her comment*

Huh... now that's certainly a quick update, I have to admit *hands you cookie as a reward* I just hope the rest of chapters will be posted up with the same speed (says the one who updates once every few months). Either way, the chapter was completly squee worthy, I give you that XD And yeah, it's keeping me off from learning for my exam today, so I guess you're doing pretty damn good job with that fic. I must say I'm envious of the way you write dialogues, I always struggle with them, seeing as I am more of a description person. It seems natural and 'pillow wound' made me smile. Let's hope for more kisses in the future, maybe with some other... nice things along the way? *evil smirk*
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have the biggest smile on my face now ^____________________^ Twas great Aini! I can't wait for more that was freakin awesome the the kisses were great but at the same time I was wondering if the kisses were chaste ones like not french kisses? I was trying to picture it in my mind and well in my mind it was french kisses cos I'm a perv hehe but I didn't get that vibe with the way you wrote it so I'm thinking they were innocent kisses on the lips only right b/c Shika is trying not to push Neji to far right? either way it was great just wanted to know. From tears to Smiles I'm much pefer smiles. Thanks for the update Aini update when you can and your hands don't hurt lol

Loves Arry
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Count down...3...2...1...SQUEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! Ok, I'm done. XD I KNEW that he would pick Neji. And yes, the wait was definantly worth it. ^_^
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!! Hope you had your ears covered rea~lly tight ^_^ Love it, love you, now go back to writing more, please! ^_~