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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person Luma
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh? I'm flattered. Really. -coughs-
I could stare some more you know.... Might be fun.
Hm. Ah well. I have better things to do other than sit and stare at someone all day anyways.
So I look forward to the next update.
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter! I do love your updates ^_^ 'Theme' Huh? .... I can guess.... Hmmm....I hope al lot more kissing comes along and maybe something more? (Hint! Hint!) But of course not before the wedding night ^_^ Maybe wegging clothes shopping? I don't know but I'm excited! ^O^

PossessedMuse *_*

(I would write more but dinner is waiting and I'm starved! >.<) Keep up the wonderful work!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know..it'd be funny as a side story if someone tried to throw the ceremonial engagement for Naruto and Sasuke. Since both are orphans. I can just see them trying to get out of all this.

I love the slow build up. It's great!
person Lonelydove
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ^_^ more more! hehe
person qwerty
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter
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schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I'm so happy for them! I figured he would choose Neji! But I'm still happy. :D I love Shikamaru. I also love this story! So well written!
schedule February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore the way this story is progressing! And how fast you update! I have never really considered Shika and Neji; but because of this story I am wanting to see a lot more of this couple. Besides Nara's mom, who else is going to be against the marriage? I mean, I can smell conflict all over this situation...Well, anyway, I love this story and can't wait to read more.
person sgou
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. And I love that you update so quickly. I really hope that something is resolved that allows Shika and Neji to get back together and marry each other. What does Shika think about marrying Neji? Does he want to? Is he ambivelant? Does he feel something for Neji- beyond the fact that he like to annoy Neji? What will he do when he realizes that Hinata is back in the picture?
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cries* I have never cried because of a story before ... but you made me cry! Ahh! I'm actually crying and my sister's looking at me funny!

PossessedMuse *_*
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wont kill you if you continue. Poor Neji. T_T Please write soon.