rate_review Reviews

Yeah, you better hide!!!!! I really love reading this....why did she come back??? Is she preggers????? I can't wait to read more...post soon!

If I wasn't so happy about the double update, I'd be screaming at you about the cliffhanger. *points finger in mock anger*
I'm interested in finding out what led Hinata to come back. Poor Neji and poor Shika - I'm sure they'll both be hurt if their engagement is called off.

Immature review:
zxckjv;clxzkjvlcxjv;lkzxjv *makes nonsensical gargling noises* Hinata's baaaaaaack~~~~~!!! Oh, god, I love you. XD Adding a level of angst to Neji already being so damn upset-- and when Shikamaru finds out-- I wanna know I wanna know I wanna know!

Less immature review:
The bat-like style of fighting is fascinating-- just by using her voice. And the venom! I knew there'd be some kind of catch when Sakura was like, "He'll be fine," and it was still so early in the chapter. XD So cute~ ♥

*squees* I'm insanely in love with how quickly you update! ♥ And SQUEE-- Shikamaru's being more direct and touchy-feely and yaaaay! It gives me tingly happies every time he makes Neji blush. ^_^

(... As an aside, because I love this fic so much, it prompted me to get off my lazy ass and finally write fic again. I hope that doesn't offend you, as it starts off with a Shikamaru/Hinata o-miai session that falls through. >_> I've seen that plot point used before and it always disinterested me, but I love that you actually had Hinata run away. XD So cute, and so different!)

ANYWAY. Do you know yet how long this fic is expected to be?? And how on earth do you update so quickly?! @_@;

Much love~ *glomp*

o.O An update! Again! Woot. I love you! I'm so happy that you made Neji so... sadistic :P I hate it when people show him as an emotionless ice chunk. Cold or not, his a human. Ne?

I sure hope that Hinata doesn't return!

Good job here. This just keeps getting better!

this is a rad story u really know how to bring out the characters well... which is alot better than what some peps do.

A heartless bastard indeed, but that's why you love him! *evil laugh*

Okay... they're alone, in a tent, half naked... and they're going to sleep? You mean, mean tease, you! XD But I like that. Keeps the suspense going (at least to perverts like me :P) and doesn't detract from the story. Neji's playing with fire here. Shikamaru is soooo going to get him for what he just did. Um, well, that is, if you're goig to write it that way XD. I like this chapter. Rock on!

You are the biggest tease ever what's someone gotta do to see just a LITTLE action come ON at least let 'em get to 1st base that's all I ask PLEASE.

~Jamie

Ahaha. This story is amusing. I've been reading it since it went up but I'm usually just to lazy to review. -shrugs-
Ah well. Not important. Shika/Neji is always fun to read though.
Whoosh. I eagerly await the next update.