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*smirk* do you really think I would miss the chance of rivewe any chapter "willingly"? *rasie eyebrow* Even with two updates in one day. *smuge look* LOL I really liked that chapter! I hope nothing to searise if wrong with Neji...*worryed look* But it was cute how Shika cudduled upto him to help keep him warm. That was so sweet! I love it! Now hurry up and give us our secoend update of today. *playfule damaned* LOL Good Work! ^___^

ARG! Evil! And my friends call me the 'cliffie queen'! You sure know how to keep us coming back for more. Good story, really good!

nice chapter and I like how slowly things are going betweem them wich is unusual for me but you somehow manage to make this fic quite interesting even when most people only want to read the lemon parts
kepp the good work up ^^

I'm glad nothing too bad happened :P and a nin that uses sound to locate, great idea!
and cute ending of the chapter :) too bad I can't wait for the second one, I have to go to sleep xD

Cute! And you always surprised me at how fast you are. O.O

Chapter 7: Neji getting hurt. The poor guy gets hit in the back of the head by a bat? I'm sorry, I laughed at that part. I thought it was hilarious ^_^ And Shikamaru sure knows how to make the moves. Sounds like someone I know >_> Anyways, the cuddle was kawaii! I'm looking forward more and more to your updates.

(Also, I have a small request to make of you. Do yo uthink you could look in on my story? it's called 'Per Te'No one seems to be giving me enough of a critisized comment and I was wondering if you can tell me what I need to work on? I'm sorry to ask .... but if your not too busy or if you get bored or something I would really be thankful to you!)

PossessedMuse *_*

I really love this story. Keep it up!
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ya that was awesome... you know what i just did a victory dance in my apartment and my roommate looked at me like an idiot. she says that when i read your fics i freak out and bounce around like a maniac. >good job only a few people can make me do that

hehe... i like the build up. things aren't going to be exactly easy for these two, and i think the slight conflicts are very well done. more, onegai? i'll wait and beg if i must... :)

Tooo Cute I don't see why I would be mad at you the endings were'nt cliffes or anything. I liked the new chappies a bunch and tentacles was used before pen-name (who I must say writes wonderfully) did it in her story so you can do it too and make it hotter! heehe I would you to have a gaara/Lee scene they are too freaking cute haha. I love the Shika cuddle time lol can't wait for more!

UWUC(update when you can)

Loves Arry

No death threats from me. Good chapter and fast update. Will let others threaten you, just did something similar to a friend of mine (in 2 stories) ROFL So I have no room to talk! *hugs*