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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I loved this. Usually, in my mind, Shika only blongs with Chouji, but I decided to try this story out of boredom...I'm glad I did. XD The characters aren't overly OOC, some of the situations, like in this last chapter, are just too funny...there is nothing I don't like about it. I will definantly keep reading as long as you keep writing.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*giggling and snickering* REALLY BIG PRESENT indeed. XD
^-^ Thanks, Aini. This bit was sweet.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was too cute all three chappies...jessh I can't keep up with your fast updates lol not complaining though. I love the Gaara/Lee mentionings that is the best Yaoi couple ever. You can go so many different ways with them but next is Shika/Neji cos there sex is the best sex! Shika's jutsu, the tentacles oh yea you know Lmao hehe that can be crazy erotic if you write it right. The naru/sasUKE mention was adorable too.Even big mouth ino and chouji were adorable, your characterizations were beyond outstanding and really well written. You make everyone with just the right amount of OOC-ness which makes their personality your creation and yet stays to how they act in the anime Great job Aini! Can't wait for more, update soon please!

Loves Arry
person Yuikey
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad Shikamaru and Neji are getting along again. This story is so awesome. I hope the next chapter come out soon.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You must update!!! This story is just tooo good!! I love it...keep up the good work, im looking forward to ur next chapter..take care. 8D
person Twiggies
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter once again.
Heh, I'm glad that Shikamaru and Neji are in good term again.
Now we just have to hope that nobody finds Hinata.. xDD

And Sasuke and Naruto are really cute.
Sasuke actually blushed! Well, of course, poor baby hurt his head. xD

Update soon!
person pen_name
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, how sweet. Shikamaru really went out of his way to please Neji this time, did he? And Sasuke bumped his head on the headboard? LOL That's something I gotta see. Anyway, I'm really dying now to know how things will turn out. Keep up the good work ^_^
person luxeflex
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*doesn't want a bad ending*
great that you put in a bit of sasunaru ^^ and I think you are keeping both shika and neji in character very well :)
all in all, oncemore a great chapter !
person Jamie
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what's up with every one setting up naru/sasu even ON THE SIDELINES are they really that popular. I think its good that things aren't going fast but come ON please give us a little action PLEASE meybe just a make-out if you will cause this anticipation thing is really bothering me.

~Jamie
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't get enough of this story. Shikamaru is the best! Poor Neji will never get to Shikamaru's level of teasing! :) Can't wait to see what they do next!