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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person mihoshi
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad with you I don't have to wait forever for an update. Keep up the great. It has a great plot. Can't wait to read more.
person luxeflex
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow you update so fast :D and another great chapter. Somehow I didn't see the mission coming I hope nothing bad happens 0_0
Sakura's reaction was sooo funny xD
person drivven
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil, just evil! LOL so when can we see more?? I really like what you've done so far.
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*SQUILE!* I love it! I love,love,love,love,love it! That was great! XD I love how Neji got some teasing back in on Shika. *squiling in chair* And omg, the ending was, *prrr* that all I have to say about that. *happy sigh* I love it, did I say I love? I love it! Please, update tomorrow, I will die without it. *big water eyes* GREAT WORK!^____^
person charmpit
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Busted! And by Kakashi-sensei, no less! That certainly puts an interesting spin on clandestine events...

If I were Neji, Shikamaru would have been naked and screaming for mercy. It's only a matter of time...
person charmpit
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Neji is so uptight! He can't even take an apology, for corn's sake! Personally, I think a good knock-down, drag-out, hair-pulling country roll in the hay would do wonders for him...and Shikamaru is just the guy to handle that.

How long until we reach that point in this fic, praytell?
person Jien
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story's going great =^.^= awesome updates soon!!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! XD I think it was a great way, to get Neji for forgive Shika. Neji is too stubbern, for it to tack anything less than that. And I don't think it was rushed at all. If I was pissed at someone, and didn't want to forgive them, and than to have them save something of mine that was preshise to me, that could NOT be replasted, well I think I would forgive them too. It would be the lest you could do. So I think it works great! I can't wait for the next chapter, to see what happens next. I still want to know what the hell happen to Hinata, and what Shika knows about it. If I didn't know any better I would say, he sent her off, just so he could marry Neji, but thats not right is it? Eather way great work! Waiting of pins and nedilts for the next chap! XD

~Persnole Note~

*Blush* I am so sorry if I embarested you with my last reivew. *Blush deepends* I tend to get caryed away, when I am trying to get my point across. Even though everthing I said was and is true, I shouldn't have sayed it is such a flanbouent way. I appoliges. *Deep bow*

schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks for the chapter! Nice save on Shikamaru's part and I'm glad that Neji's starting to lighten up a little. By the way, nice cover-up by Naruto and Sasuke! ha, ha! I love it!
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals happily* You used my ending! I'm so happy~~~ considering I've been in this fandom for such a short period of time, you have no idea how happy that makes me. ♥ ♥ ♥

Awww! All resolved! ^_____^ ♥ I adore you~ Shikamaru saving Neji's dad's shougi board = EPIC WIN. (Ah, netspeak/gamerspeak.) No, seriously? That was so sweet~ and using his shadows to do it is the AWESOME. I love you. ♥