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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person Anaheyla
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost had a heart attack when Neji's shogi board was almost broken!

GO SHIKAMARU!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I believe you have me wanting for more >_> That's not always a good thing, I can be very needy O.O

Chapter 6: Shikamaru's Jutsu = The coolest ever! I'm glad Neji forgave him, Shikamaru couldn't have had a better trump card to deal. I wonder if maybe he planned that? You never know with Shikamaru I suppose. Naruto and Sasuke, I totally saw that coming. I mean seriously, they just were made for eachother. There is no denying it! Anyways, enough of my weirdness, keep the chapters coming and I'll let you like the bowl of the strawberry cake mix I just made >_> (I like cake O.O)

PossessedMuse *_*
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good and cute story! hehe i love that shikamaru is the dominate one in the relationship,
a shikamaru in control is so hot X)
person ydjessy
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, for clearing up the confusion, loved the new chap. keep up the good work
person lo
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really quite cute. I can't wait to see where you go with this plot.
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the heads up, great chapters
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O.O You are swift. I left for two days and came back to chapter 5! I am eternally greatful for your rapid updates.

The dribble of the blood orange was classic. I am a little sorry that Shikamaru's mom still doesn't think very highly of Neji. Oh well, I'm sure she'll come around.

I have always halways had a problem with Ino. I don't think I'm a big fan of her. But everyone else I adore just fine.

The move Shikamaru made on Neji? O.O unexpected and I totally loved it! I am going to have to agree with Shikamaru's thinking. A flustered Neji is a cute Neji and amusing.

Thank you for updating so quickly and I hope you keep up the wonderous pace ^_^

PossessedMuse *_*
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
One thing even a genius can't anticipate is human emotions. They're not logical, following set patterns. Shika is going to have his hands full!
person Jien
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor genius. I love your story. UPdate soon =^.^=
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tcheeee.... Shika's right, Neji is too touchy, but Shikamaru tends to get a bone, every now and then, that he just doesn't want to let go. Genius he may be, but delicate touch he's not. X3 Ah well, Shikamaru will bring Neji around EVENTUALLY...
...I hope... ^^;;