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o______O Shikamaru! What have you done?! That's not how you get someone like Neji to relax, damn it! Ahem... yeah. Anyway, good work with this one (and so fast, too ^_^) and I'll be waiting for the next update!

ps. you know, since it was pointed out that Neji is a virgin when it comes to gay sex, what about Shikamaru? is he a virgin too? *grins*

yay another chapter ^^ hahaha I love how you portray shikamaru, it's just great, I'm still smiling.
I am really curious to see how shikamaru is going to fix this :P

OMG this is great, I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do

you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know?

the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com

This story just makes me grin. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Heheh.
So amusing.
Poor Neji, though.
Well, he clearly isn't emotionless! :D ..But he is a virgin. I'm loving it.
I've always loved the virgin Neji who always blushes when somebody talks about his (nonexistent) sex life. xD

I love Shika too.
Don't worry, even geniuses makes some mistakes. xDD

Update soon!

Neji can only resist the Nara sex appeal for so long...

Heheh, Neji is a virgin.

A reivew a day keeps...the story from delays...? LOL Well it kinda rimes...^___^;

Well I can tell you one thing, this may be a filler chapp, but it sure didn't feel like it this time. Not that the last chap was bad or anything (so don't worry about that! ^__^) it just had the filler feel...So I like what you did here, you tock the same scurcomstans you had in the last chap, (basicly needing to do anther filler chap) but estated of doing it like last one, you tuck it up a noch and riped the filler chap feel, out of the feller chap! Which is GREAT!

I am loveing watching a good auther (with is you), transforming into a great auther. Your not just getting better with each story, but with every CHAPTER of each story! Which if FANTSTICE! Everyone get better with time, your just speeding that up to HAFE, which is great! You really have talent for writing, and your really getting in tune with writting as a skill, and your own style! It tacks people years to do that, and by what I can tell you haven't been writing for that long, which is amaszing with the storys you are putting out! You are wanderfule at writing! I can't not wait for the next chapp, and see what you blow my mind away with this time! Great Work! ^___^

*Compent on Story*
Poor Shika. *Sigh, pat him on shouler* He did try...he just want WAY over bound. *nerives and amused laugh* Let just hope that he can just tack a step back and regroup. He is in the right area, just way off in left feil, with his approche. Like a wild bull in a glass house! LOL Not exsately the right aproch when dealling with Neji, exspaule if he is on the deffents already. *shick head* He maybe a guines on the 'war' baitlefield, but he is not s quines in the field of love. You can tell that from this chap. LOL I wander if you need to bring someone in to just to give him a little help with this? I wander who could help.... Well if you do pull someone in to help, I will just have to wait for the next chapp, and see what happens next. Great Work! I am so loveing this story! Update as soon as you can, like tommorow! LOL Great Work! ^__^

Thank you for another quick update on an enjoyable story. I really like the pace of the story so far. Poor Shika - he tried. I love the concept of a runaway Hinata - it makes me giggle. Usually, in arranged marriage stories, she refuses to runaway and "disrespect the clan". lol

oohhh...i just started reading this story...i likes alot..
please update soon?? Cant wait to read the next chapter ^_^