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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

person Anaheyla
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued. Do continue.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job this is really well-written and fun! I love the teasing banter between shika and neji it's too cute. I love Blood-oranges!!!! It was sexy and innocent with the juice dripping down Neji's chin hehehe Can't wait for more UWUC(Update when you can!)

Loves Arry
person Lavinia
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. I really hope that you update soon.

I like the way you have made Neji and Shikamaru to get to know each other, though I think that you made Neji accept the situation too quickly, but it works anyway, so it's ok.
person Luma
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm. This certainly is interesting.
person Lavinia
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooo! You updated so quickly! Woohoo! I love authors who update quickly, I reward them with lots and lots of reviews!

I really like this chap. I think that you making Neji hurt is good, and you sis it well, now you have a perfect opportunity for angst and Neji/Shika bonding :D (and IF you want to back pedal, this is a perfect opportunity for that too!) very nicely done, you can make almost any kind of twist out of this! You have me anxiously waiting!

And just so you know, your story inspired me to restart writing my Neji/Kiba fic, that has been on hold for a long time. Take that as a compliment...
person luxeflex
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this fic! please update!
I am now officialy obsessed with this fic (and the pairing)
*stalks*
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really getting into this story. Love Neji! Keep it up great job so far.
schedule February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OUCH! That was cold...But I get the feeling that Ino didn't mean it as bad as it sounded. Ino can and is ruthless when it comes to her words, but she dosen't mean any real harm from them. Not that it makes it right for her saying such things, but I think to her its kinda of like when I call my frined 'bich' when were kidding around. She knows I don't mean it, and she just laughs and calls me worse stuff than that, its all fun and game...but we can never forget the last part of the saying: Its all fun and games,...untell someone gets hurt. *sigh* She just dosn't know when to let up. But your right girls can and are crule to guys, but I think that girls are even more crule to other girls than they are ever to guys. But thats just been my exsparents in life. LOL Anyways, on to happyer subjects, this chapp was good, it fealt like a filler, but it gave good understanding of the chearters and there interactions with each other, as well as giveing needed info for the plot to move fowored. I really liked it! Good Work! ^____^
person pen_name
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwh... *blushes* Thank you, I'm glad that you like my stories too. And really? Reviews might make you write faster? So if I review ten times you'll write ten times faster? XD Just kidding. Just take your time and enjoy it, okay? Anyhoo, I really like this latest chapter. I'm glad Neji decided to follow Lee's advice. But hm... why do I have a feeling Shikamaru had something to do with Hinata's disappearance? Oops, don't mind me, that's just my overactive imagination working XD Anyway, thanks for the update and I'm eagerly waiting for the next one ^_^
person Word_Slave
schedule February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Thanks, can't wait to read more. And I too wish it were longer, but if it was, we wouldn't get to see it as soon! Thanks
Slave