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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Shika teases Neji and protects him at the same time. Thanks for another update - you update so quickly - thank you again.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
's good! Thank you!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it when Shikamaru's not being.. um.. Overly lazy. xDD
He is at least DOING something. :D
Like teasing Neji. How adorable.
I wish his mother thought that too. xD I'm sure she'll get over it.
Shikaku is just awesome as well. xD
I love that family. :D
Shikamaru teasing Neji is just too fun. xD
Update soon again, I can't wait til I get to read the next chapter.
He is at least DOING something. :D
Like teasing Neji. How adorable.
I wish his mother thought that too. xD I'm sure she'll get over it.
Shikaku is just awesome as well. xD
I love that family. :D
Shikamaru teasing Neji is just too fun. xD
Update soon again, I can't wait til I get to read the next chapter.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your right, its going to talk alot to get me to come around to Shika's mother. She is really starting to crowl under my skin, in not a very nice way. *grrr* I hope she has a VERY good reasion for her actions, because other whise I don't think I will be frogiveing her for her rude coments anytime soon. *cross arms, with a strun, stubbern look* But I guess you had to have someone, in the story, to give it a bet of angst, but that don't mean I have to like! *childish pout* Anyways great chap! I am loveing how your are protraying all the cheaters...even Shika's mother...I see her as a villeion of the story, so ya, tack the good with the bad. Every story needs some kind of villeion, or bad guy, or the story would be borring to read. Which it bad, very bad! I just really like the way you write this and all your other storys I read. You can keep it intreating, and fun, with out over doing it, with is GREAT! So update as soon as you can! XD Great Work! ^___^
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More ShikaNeji!
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting chapter 2 up so quickly. I really liked it. I kind of felt sorry for Neji when Shikamaru's mother said "How disappointing" about Neji taking Hinata's place. But seeing how nice Shika is to him made me feel better. I really like how this is playing out (no pun intended for the game of shougi ^O^) and how the plot is starting to melt together. I still don't know what's going to happen next but you have me wondering and anticipating the next chapter. Thank you again and update soon!
PossessedMuse *_*
PossessedMuse *_*
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have a lot of respect for Shikamaru standing up for Neji like that. Where did Hinata go? Please, not run off with Naruto - that's one of my pet peeve pairings, Naru/Hina, Naru/Sakura....two girls that don't work for him, lol.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Feh..I'm so slow.
Yay! This is the ShikaNeji you'd mentioned in Starting Fresh-lazy- right?
I was hoping you'd get around to writing it, and so far it looks really good.
The marriage thing does seem to get used a lot for these two, but I don't really think that's a bad thing as long as you can make it work. I like the way you write, it's simple, but not dumbed down, so it's really easy to enjoy your stories, and I'm sure you'll do a really good job on this one too.
[Incidentally...wouldn't Shikamaru and Neji make a great old married couple? I can't help but think that...]
Yay! This is the ShikaNeji you'd mentioned in Starting Fresh-lazy- right?
I was hoping you'd get around to writing it, and so far it looks really good.
The marriage thing does seem to get used a lot for these two, but I don't really think that's a bad thing as long as you can make it work. I like the way you write, it's simple, but not dumbed down, so it's really easy to enjoy your stories, and I'm sure you'll do a really good job on this one too.
[Incidentally...wouldn't Shikamaru and Neji make a great old married couple? I can't help but think that...]
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaawh... This is really great! I particularly like the way you picture Neji and Shikamaru when they were little in the first chapter, both cute and smart. The second chapter is also a love ^_^ Neji should really listen to Lee on this one! Anyway, thank you so much for sharing this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! ;D
I love the pairing!
And Shikamaru is just the best. xD
Really, lazy but nice.
Neji should actually thank Hinata. Neji got such a good man because of her, after all! XDDD
Update soon again!
I love the pairing!
And Shikamaru is just the best. xD
Really, lazy but nice.
Neji should actually thank Hinata. Neji got such a good man because of her, after all! XDDD
Update soon again!