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for The Way Things Are

by Aini

schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*pump fist in air* Way to go Shika! XD I knew I loved that guy for some reasion...I am not sure if I like his mother to much though...I know she didn't mean it, how it sounded, but still. It wasn't very nice. I really like how you layed this chapp out. It was great! I liked the part were Iruka was so upset about the arranged marrige that "Lee" had to tack over his class, so he could come down, and just the though of a buch of wild, ranbucis, kids demanding answers from Lee. I can see the look on his face now, that was funny! LOL I loved it! Great Work! Update as soon as you can! ^___^
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, that what I would do with this story. I love it! I think the fousted marrige, is great for this stroy. I belive that it is one of the only whys to get the cheareater Neji to consent to marriing someone, he would not normale chose. So I think it works great, and you have set it just right for him to accsapte Shika, not only cause of his familly saying so, but also for him to fall in love with Shika! And with that, the marrige wouldn't be forsted, but as a gift from fate. I like it...no, I love it! Great Work!^___^

*Persnol Note* You needn't to give what I said in the last reivew a sceand or threed thought. I am not going to be using any of the plot bunnys from this fic. I don't need to, your doing it for me. *smik* Like Shika would say, its to troblsome. I am just going to set back and let you do all the work, and I am just going to injoy the great story. :p

You really are do a great job on this fic. I love it! As all your other works. I hope my telling you about the plot bunnys, didn't make you mad or irreated. It was just my way of compenting you. As the saying would go: "The best from of falter, is imatsion." Am I right? ^____~ Great Work! Update as soon as you can! ^___^
person PossessedMuse
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Proluge: Yep, that sounds like Neji >_>

Chapter 1: After I read the proluge, I had to know about the whole 'engagement' thing and sure enough, Neji is the one who gets slammed with the downer. Poor guy. Oh well, I like Shika/Neji and don't worry about how they get together or how much the 'Neji's duty card' has been played, just write what you like to write and have fun with it. So far, I like where this is going. Keep up the good work.

PossessedMuse *_*
person llyoung
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Shika and Neji stories. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks for writing.
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hum...This story seems to be very interasting...I just had a plot bunny or two spout from this myself...I have no clue what your planing to do with this plot, but I know what I would do with it. LOL But this is not my story, it is yours, and I hope you updat it soon. I would love to see where you take this. I am very intreasted it seeing what happens. Great Work! ^___^

*Personle NOte* Don't worry about the plot bunnys that sproted for me with this fic, I would never tack a story, or ues a stroy ideal, with out your or anyone else with out permiseion. I was just saying that it was a good ideal and would write one like this one, if you haddent betten me to it. LOL So ya, I really want to see where you tack this. Update as soon as you can! ^___^
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if I'm your first comment? I believe I am. Well, anyways I like what you've started so far. I'm going to keep checking up on this one. The plot sounds interesting so far even though I have no idea what is going to come next. I like stories like that. Also, it makes me wonder who Shikamaru's bride-to-be will be? Please update as soon as you can. Thank you.

*UnfulfilledDestiny*
person noit
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wish u had a summary. :P i know spoiler is bad...*shrug*
is this a shikaneji fic ???

nice first chappie.