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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awsm fic. plz update 4th chapter as soon as possible!!! cant wait!!! xD
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, great story... cant wait for the next chapter...
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story so far. I like the way you have grown the team up. I'll be checking back for more of your story.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story. I feel so bad for Naruto. I cant wait to see more.
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good story, great beginning, can't wait for more! Update soon!^_^
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not really good at offering constructive comments early in fics, so I'll just say this has a awesome start and can't wait to see what you do with it. The only question I have is why was Sakura watching Sasuke suspiciously when he carried Naruto out of the cave?
Thanx!
Thanx!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what could have happened to Naruto. That was a very touching moment when Sasuke went to him. I cant wait to see how the story unfolds.
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
uuuuuuuuuuupdaaaaaaaaaaaate!!!!!! i luv, luv, luv it. good plot. and just go with watever flows. great plot. it actully reminds me of one of my storys i began to write b4.... well n-e-ways. im glad in actuall interesting story has come along. i was starting to lose my love for aff.net. please keep the story coming!! fantastic plot.
^.^ ill b keeping an eye out for this one. oh and my view will always be craving sasunaru. just to say. so you do watever you think keeps the story alive and easier to write about. good luck!!!!!
^.^ ill b keeping an eye out for this one. oh and my view will always be craving sasunaru. just to say. so you do watever you think keeps the story alive and easier to write about. good luck!!!!!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Shock was misspelled but I realized the word you were trying to use. I'd rather if you kept it Sasu/Naru. Sakura would be great as an older sister type of thing but not in a relationship. You going to bring Iruka in too to help take care of him?
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning, I am looking forward to more.